Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "haiku (practised predator)"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from rrabinow
Wonderful haiku for the reptile haiku prompt. I like your use if description. I like your aha moment. Perfect picture to go along with your haiku. Best of luck
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Wonderful haiku for the reptile haiku prompt. I like your use if description. I like your aha moment. Perfect picture to go along with your haiku. Best of luck
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Hi rrabinow, thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment from stanishmichelle
The inter-connecting lines are my favourite in this poem, although the satori is a good ending. This is a poem and I wish you well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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The inter-connecting lines are my favourite in this poem, although the satori is a good ending. This is a poem and I wish you well in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Hi :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)