No means NO
nonet contest16 total reviews
Comment from NurseBarb
Strong nonet poem unlike the others. Great use of words having to use so few of them to get your message across. Great presentation. The image perfect. Syllable count is perfect as well. All around fantastic entry. Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Strong nonet poem unlike the others. Great use of words having to use so few of them to get your message across. Great presentation. The image perfect. Syllable count is perfect as well. All around fantastic entry. Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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I am pleased you like the nonet I wrote, thanks for the comments
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
strong use of optional rhyme including the good proximate rhyme of rape/late
a powerful story of social commentary filled with raw emotion
Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
strong use of optional rhyme including the good proximate rhyme of rape/late
a powerful story of social commentary filled with raw emotion
Brooke
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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thank you Brooke for the great review
Comment from Eric1
I sincerely hope taht this isn't biographical, rape is a henious crime, and no woman should ever have to go through it!
YOU HAVE WRITTEN A WONDERFUL NONET THAT SAYS IT ALL. I wish you luck in the contast.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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I sincerely hope taht this isn't biographical, rape is a henious crime, and no woman should ever have to go through it!
YOU HAVE WRITTEN A WONDERFUL NONET THAT SAYS IT ALL. I wish you luck in the contast.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thanks you Eric for the great review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from onebrit
Rape is the ultimate power trip. We need to do a much better job teaching consent. No always means no.......Im so sorry if this experience was yours, the worst thing that can befall a woman.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Rape is the ultimate power trip. We need to do a much better job teaching consent. No always means no.......Im so sorry if this experience was yours, the worst thing that can befall a woman.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Nosha17
Great clear message to highlight this terrible problem. Good picture and good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your message. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Great clear message to highlight this terrible problem. Good picture and good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your message. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thanks Faye for the good wishes and review.
Comment from Trybuck
You got your point across quite well in this short one. No does mean no. Violators should not be set free. very well done with your entry, Buck
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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You got your point across quite well in this short one. No does mean no. Violators should not be set free. very well done with your entry, Buck
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thanks for your great comments and review.