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Comment from TAB_that's me
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I was having this exact conversation yesterday about my brother not believing that Jesus is the way to Heaven. Great poem of faith for the contest - good luck:)
Teresa

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
    Thank you Teresa for your review and luck, I have a brother in law who is a non believer,All we can do is keep praying for them.In Christ Sandy
Comment from Nosha17
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Those who don't recognise Jesus Christ cannot surely be true Christians. You are absolutely right that Christ atoned for our sins and without that we would never be able to enter the Kingdom of Heaven. Lovely choice of words and powerful spiritual message to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
    Thank you Faye for your review and comment.I appreciate them,Hope you have a blessed day
Comment from lynglyng
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I believe in Jesus and I want to praise His name with you there someday. Great poem excellent rhyming and flow.great message.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thank you for your review and I look forward to seeing you there God bless. sandy
Comment from rrabinow
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What a great poem for the faith prompt. I like that this poem is thought provoking. I like that you stand up for what you believe and it shows. I like the way you are passionate. Great flow to your poem as well. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thank you for reviewing and kind comments God bless you .sandy
Comment from Charlene0513
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This should be portrayed on every sign entering every city. This is very well constructed and written.
Very nice flow and cadence throughout.
Charlene

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
    Thank you for your review and sweet reply I apreciate you taking the time to read this and replying.God bless