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Comment from Muffins
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Poor momma, already she has to deal with those type of questions. It is universal funny when parents are caught in the " awkward moment " and sneaky good when they pass the buck to parent #2.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
    LOL Muffins! Thank you for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Acquired Taste
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Very cute story. I had two girls so I never faced that particular question - but there were others that they offered up. Quite nice. AT=/

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
    Hi AT :) Thank you for your great feedback :) Yes, I have 2 girls aswell as my son - the questions are priceless (and endless!!) Kindest regards...
Comment from kiwijenny
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This is definitely a....go ask your father moment.....
Kids are so precious,.....cute photo .............and a good answer to the prompt.........well done and good luck with the competition
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much kiwijenny for your great review and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Louise Michelle
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LOL - this brings back memories of my bathing with my son. He asked, "Where is your tushy?" (meaning penis) As a progressive mother, I said, "Women have vaginas." He laughed and laughed repeating the funny word. Very cute story. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
    LOL Lou :) That's definitely the best way to be - straight forward! Thanks for your great feedback. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
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My mom would have turned fifty shades of red, and clamed up like Elmers glue. The stork is still on the payroll too, I imagine. Good luck. Kenny

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    LOL! Thank you Kenny for your fun feedback and good luck wishes :) I appreciate both! Kindest regards...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I love it! LOL, that is so funny yet a valid question from a child. Actually, I'd like to know too! LOL. This is such a good contest entry, Good luck! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    Thank you Sandra for your great feedback... I honestly didn't know what to say when 'Robbie' asked me, other than - go ask daddy! Thank you also for your good luck wishes :) Kindest regards...
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 24-Jul-2014
    When my eldest son was 5 years old, he walked into the bathroom to chat to his dad while he was bathing. I followed him in as he started to cry. My husband and I were quite concerned, I asked him what was wrong, as he was obviously upset. He turned his devastated face to me then pointing his finger at his father's private part, said, 'Will mine look like that?' I have never seen my husband blush before! Don't they make you laugh! xx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    They certainly do!! x
Comment from rjuselius
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haha. lol. this is pretty f**king funny:) i don't know what i would tell my son if i had one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    LOL Rebekka! Daddy changed the subject if I remember rightly!! Thank you for your good luck wishes and fun feedback :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Ha ha, now that was actually funny! Actually, it's the first damn one of these I've read yet that actually was. Does no one read the prompt instructions?

Well done, and clearly the best thus far. Good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much Dean for your great feedback :) That incident, I was (for once) kind of lost for words! Thank you for the good luck wishes also :) Kindest regards...
    ps. rules? what are rules??! LOL ;)
reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Jul-2014
    Ha ha, yeah, you got that right, what are rules?

    You're very welcome! :D
Comment from Cajungirl
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LOL, what a fantastic funny short story. What a great time to give old Dad a chance to exercise his parenting skills. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    Hi Cajungirl :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...
Comment from adewpearl
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Yep, we think we're open and willing to discuss any old question a child might throw at us, and then they ask something that proves us wrong. LOL A fun slice of life anecdote with good dialogue.
Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much Brooke for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...