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Comment from Angel Debbie
Everything needs water to survive
This is a great write should have been entered in a contest.
Great write next one enter in a contest, you have a good chance at placing.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Everything needs water to survive
This is a great write should have been entered in a contest.
Great write next one enter in a contest, you have a good chance at placing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Angel, for the excellent review.
Comment from Kingsland
Intuitively is a great way to start this poem out with. It give the poem an extra punch. This was a short poem that made my mind work a bit and that is always a good thing... John
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Intuitively is a great way to start this poem out with. It give the poem an extra punch. This was a short poem that made my mind work a bit and that is always a good thing... John
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Thank you, John, for the excellent review.