The Cook and the Time Traveller
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Comment from jadapenn
Oops, picking up a few problems, are we. I should have guessed Darren had a wife back home and a mistress in the past. He's getting his knickers in a knot and I'd like to know where you're going with this story. Well penned. luv jada
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Oops, picking up a few problems, are we. I should have guessed Darren had a wife back home and a mistress in the past. He's getting his knickers in a knot and I'd like to know where you're going with this story. Well penned. luv jada
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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lol, thanks, Jada :-). Darren certainly has the more complicated end of the bargain, but then he's the one more in need of a change. I've just posted chapter 5. 6 will come in a few days.
Mike