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Bedtime stories

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Many bedtime stories for children.

21 total reviews 
Comment from sunnilicious
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Technology is amazing. The birth of a baby in the family should always be a wonderful experience shared by all. Good dialogue. Realistic story. Nice story.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely week , Ine. Thanks ever so much for the lovely six.
Comment from michaelcahill
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Kids are so honest. I never ask one how I look anymore, I'm afraid they'll tell me! A cute story and very well written. You've captured the thinking of the kids perfectly. mikey

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely week , Ine
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

I like when you write little stories. They're always written so well and certainly holds my interest. Kids are so cute and always asking questions.

Kat

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely week , Ine
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I agree with Aunt Ena. My wife and I made it well known to her obstetrician that we did not want to know if our babies were going to be boys or girls. We were very blessed to receive on of each.

Kids do say the darnedest things, don't they, Ine?

Nice heartwarming little story.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a lovely week , Ine
Comment from Dutchie
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Well written this bedtime-story Ine. Nice explanation for children to learn something about the birth of a baby in a clear way. Had to smile about the answer of the children. Yes, that's how they react. Well done, girl!!! Fia

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a great and blessed Sunday , Ine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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This is a really good bedtime story to till children. It's a lesson that is interesting and informative and good for children these things. Well written Ine. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a great and blessed Sunday , Ine
Comment from Jackarrie
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A wonderful story about modern technology and how children will just take it in their stride. I suppose it does make life easier for the expectant Mum to have the photo to show them.

Well written, I enjoyed it.

Mary

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a great and blessed Sunday , Ine
Comment from emrpoems
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Great nature study lesson for young children. Short and to the point. Never knew you wrote stories too. Good luck with your book

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a great and blessed Sunday , Ine -
Comment from mjac777
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Nowhere they see a baby (nowhere DO they see a baby?)

Nicely written for a child. Simple,clear, and interesting prose.

I would definitely read this to a child to explain echograms.

Nice work.


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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


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    Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a great and blessed Sunday , Ine -
Comment from c_lucas
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Privacy is a lost art with the new imaging machines. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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reply by c_lucas on 29-Jun-2014
    You're welcome, Ime. Charlie