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The clue is in the title!
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Comment from
Eric1
What a nigh on perfect poem for this contest, love the Rhyming sequences and the whole thing flows so well, the final stanza where you reach forty is inspired! Good luck.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
Hello Eric :) thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from
l.raven
you go gettem...have fun all the way...live life like it is your last day...the time does fly...I love your poem and the picture perfect...
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
Hi linda, thank you for your great feedback and words of wisdom :) Kindest regards as always...
reply by l.raven on 18-Jun-2014
you are so welcome...xxoo
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