Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

still life awaits
fluent perfection,
but never observes
quiescent reflection Lovely evocative
that mirrors life's simplest truth--
halfness , halfness? Meaning?
halfness/completeness/emptiness. All though 'ness' suffixes

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a wonderful contribution to the contest. You chose your 21 words with care and the precision of a master. This is a wonderful read that leaves one thinking for a good long time. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)