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Comment from akulkumol
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Nice description of the bad effects of TV on young children, in hundred words you have captured the social scene beautifully. Really enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014


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Comment from freepass
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Televison does effect your kids, they even had it on a episode of "Yes Dear" where the kid would beat up Greg after watching the 3 stooges!
So 5 very big stars*****
I didn't know they had hip-hop Sesame st though!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014


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Comment from Charlene0513
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Quite well said and no further explanation is required.
With so many harsh and volatile language spoken it is no wonder our kids are getting bad mouthed when they speak to their parents.
Charlene

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014


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Comment from ElegantButler
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Oh how very true. We are so inundated by bad TV that we hardly have the time to separate the visual wheat from the chafe. And we have become so used to having critics and politicians tell us what is and isn't okay for our kids that we no longer know what to pick.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014


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Comment from livelylinda
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lancellot: No, no more words are needed. I get it. Everything on TV is not for kids, even when advertised as so. Cute write and parents should pay attention. livelylinda

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014


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Comment from LIJ Red
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I didn't count the words. Shame on me. nice story, though, and smooth dialog. All television that gives any child a hint that "fair" ever comes free or that you can get anything for nothing should be extinguished.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

Comment from mermaids
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It is a scary pic with all those muppet characters with weapons. I like the dialog form here,it ahs an impact on the reader and makes one think. Televison is not for children.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

Comment from Jackarrie
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A very good 100 word story, it has some good points in it, I like the statement

"Don't be silly. If it were bad for kids, they wouldn't show it on television, right?"

Very difficult to do anything about it, I know.

Well done, good luck in the contest. Mary


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi lancellot,

I think the final statement by the 'parent' sums it up. You could add 'if its on the internet, it must be true ..' to the list. There is a link to violent TV games, shows and the violence kids show to each other. It won't be addressed though, there is far to much money being made from it.

Patrick

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014


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Comment from sibhus
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Yeah we be gang-bangin
we be shit slangin
keepin dem homies in line
all the while we doing the rhyme

Ja, def a good point here. Why are our children so violent and having sex at 10, I don't remember Timmy and Lassie behaving like that. Good piece and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014


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