Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

They look more scary than happy til their eyes open and they get some more feathers. Of course, this will happen with the parents' devotion.

Cute write.

Best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the review.

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

The spring season must have inspired you to write this cute poem and post a darling picture of mom(s) feeing the babies. Really like this entry and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the great review

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This 3-5-3 writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest with perfect syllable and line count. The knowing line at the end concludes the write positively. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

thanks for the great review and encouragement.