Bible Stories in Rhyme
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Daniel"Poetry and Stories from the Bible
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Comment from angelface2
The message is great, with Daniel in the Lion's Den. Meter is off, but I expected to see that. It's hard to keep an even meter when a story is that long. Keep it up Carolyn. Hugs. Sally
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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The message is great, with Daniel in the Lion's Den. Meter is off, but I expected to see that. It's hard to keep an even meter when a story is that long. Keep it up Carolyn. Hugs. Sally
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Hi there,
I will take another look at the meter, I appreciate your eye and suggestions. Glad you enjoyed Daniel. :-) Carolyn
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your rhyming couplets that
tell the story of Daniel.
A beautiful story of the power of faith.
Daniel believed and was saved.
Great descriptive lines.
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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I enjoyed your rhyming couplets that
tell the story of Daniel.
A beautiful story of the power of faith.
Daniel believed and was saved.
Great descriptive lines.
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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I am delighted you enjoyed the manner in which this poem was written. Thank you so much, Carolyn
Comment from Ben Colder
This needs to be presented on Faith writers and published. Christina book centers should enjoy this type poetry writing. Blessings to you.
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This needs to be presented on Faith writers and published. Christina book centers should enjoy this type poetry writing. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thank you Ben Colder for your wonderful encouragement. I would like to hear more about Faith writers. I appreciate your comments. The book should have around 20 to 30 stories when I have completed it. :-) Carolyn
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Faith writer.com. You'll find it . Silver membership free. Maybe something worth while.
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Thanks Ben for the info. Good night friend. :-)
Comment from Nosha17
That is a lovely retelling of the bible story in rhyme. You make it come alive and refresh my memory. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. Faye
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That is a lovely retelling of the bible story in rhyme. You make it come alive and refresh my memory. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thanks Faye for this affirming review. It is wonderful to see that the poem is received well. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Again another nice biblical story in a poem Carolyn. The picture goes well with story. I found this nice to read, but the flow in the fifth verse didn't feel quite right. (Daniel the whole night spent). For the rest I found it a lovely poem.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Again another nice biblical story in a poem Carolyn. The picture goes well with story. I found this nice to read, but the flow in the fifth verse didn't feel quite right. (Daniel the whole night spent). For the rest I found it a lovely poem.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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I will go back to that phrase and see if I can do something with it. Thanks so much Sarah, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Dean Kuch
I love this particular story in the Bible, notesandmore, and your well rhymed, metered and perfectly expressed depiction of it was an excellent poetic retelling of the age-old tale.
Wonderfully done!
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I love this particular story in the Bible, notesandmore, and your well rhymed, metered and perfectly expressed depiction of it was an excellent poetic retelling of the age-old tale.
Wonderfully done!
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thanks Dean for this wonderful review of Daniel. So glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome, Carolyn, and I did, it was excellent.
Comment from GE Parson
Hey Carolyn my Friend,
Teriffical poem. One of the best I've ever read.!!!
Someone said, Daniel would rather face a pack of lions than miss a moment of payer" (Oh that someone was me! LOL)
Keep 'em coming
Your Friend,
Jerry
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Hey Carolyn my Friend,
Teriffical poem. One of the best I've ever read.!!!
Someone said, Daniel would rather face a pack of lions than miss a moment of payer" (Oh that someone was me! LOL)
Keep 'em coming
Your Friend,
Jerry
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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More on the way, thank you so much Jerry for your continued support and the wonderful award.
:-) Your friend,
Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
I must tell you, my four grandchildren enjoyed Jonah and David very much.
Daniel is another beautiful Biblical story/poem. So glad you've decided to share your poetic, spiritual story. Have a blessed weekend. The kids will here this one on Sunday when their families come to dinner.
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I must tell you, my four grandchildren enjoyed Jonah and David very much.
Daniel is another beautiful Biblical story/poem. So glad you've decided to share your poetic, spiritual story. Have a blessed weekend. The kids will here this one on Sunday when their families come to dinner.
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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If all goes well and my mind holds out, LOL, I should end up with a book of around 20 or 30 Bible story poems. Your comments are always so uplifting to me and encourages me to write more.
Have a sweet weekend, :-) Carolyn
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I surely enjoy your poetry.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is another nice story about Daniel. You did a good job in writing it. The rhyming is great too. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more.
Kat
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Hi Carolyn,
This is another nice story about Daniel. You did a good job in writing it. The rhyming is great too. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more.
Kat
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thanks Kat,
When the book is finished, I should have around 20 or 30, if my mind holds out. LOL . I read each story again several times to make sure I represent the Lord to the best of my ability.
Love you, Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Awesome! Daniel is one of my favorite OT books and you have done his story superb justice in your well chosen words. This was a wonderful read and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
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Awesome! Daniel is one of my favorite OT books and you have done his story superb justice in your well chosen words. This was a wonderful read and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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And thank you for such thoughtful comments. :-) Carolyn