Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Again you, I couldn't sleep yet...a lot on my mind....I love the way you tell this Bible stories...I do enjoy reading them...just keep them coming...now I might try sleeping again...a wonderful poem...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Luff you too. Thanks for the wonderful encouragement,
Have a great week-end. I hope you get some rest. :-) Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 24-May-2014

Hi Carolyn, you are so very welcome...luff and you have a great weekend too...xxoo

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Well, Carolyn, I look forward to reading your series of Bible Stories in Rhyme. I believe you will tell us the stories in a manner that we can understand.

Looking forward to the next installment, John

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks John,
I was hoping you would enjoy this series. It was requested I write more, so I felt another short book coming on. LOL
Now if you and I can get good publishers (you know, huge advances) we would be doing ok, right? Then we could do our book signings at, what's the store you always tell me about, Barnes and Noble, on the same day, wouldn't that be fun?
Love, Carolyn

reply by jmdg1954 on 23-May-2014

That is an awesome idea. Lets pray to make it happen. John

reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Will do

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

I am so very pleased to hear that you've decided to create a book of your inspirational Bible stores into a book of story/poems. I so look forward in following alone.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks so much, it seems the best way to keep track of them. I appreciate your encouragement and support. :-) Carolyn

reply by Cajungirl on 23-May-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

I have enjoyed the two poems that you have already written and I am certainly looking forward to what promises to be a great series on the Bible. Good luck.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thank you Tom

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,
I hope you and your family are well. We are getting better. Thank you. I am in Wales now, at my daughters place where I am going to stay for a few days. A change of air as they say.
I am glad i read this writing. And i am glad you are interested in this type of writing. People with faith should never let their faith down.
Keep writing and my only advice ..give the story a bit more flesh , a bit story.
Take care.

Benny

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks Benny, I did this as a quick intro to the book, that I had already started. Smile. When I have time I will go back and fatten it up a bit. Have a great break in Wales.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Title "To long to remember" -> Too long (?)

I loved the project which can help us understand more of the bible as well as to keep up with our faith and belief. A gentle reminder is always welcome as we tend to forget the word in our busy life and problems, smiles.
I truly enjoyed the writes on David and Jonah and eager to read more form you.
Great work and well done!
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thank you dear friend for the encouragement. Love, Carolyn

reply by 9999pool on 22-May-2014

Welcome. Nice to read your wonderful works.
As a slight departure from my normal fare, there will be a four part series of intellectually challenging writes for reviewers to contemplate and invoke their reasoning and thinking hats, smiles. Maybe even controversial by normal standards, :))
Cheerio, love, Ritchie. :))

P.S. Will be good to read your intellectual comments on this controversial 4 part series, ha ha.

reply by the author on 22-May-2014

I'll put on my 'thinking cap', or hat as you say, and give it my all. LOL

reply by 9999pool on 23-May-2014

Just wondering how many caps you have, lol. "Finding the Truth - Part 1" has just been posted. Give me your best thinking cap shot, :))
Love, bro Ritchie. :))

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

I would love to read your writings of Bible Stories. I like how you made me think about the word "all". How it leaves no one out. I was also always fascinated by the word "forever" as described in the Bible how when we go to heaven we live forever. It blows my mind that we will for the first time experience something that truly is forever, because here on earth there's an end to EVERYTHING. I'm just rambling I guess but looking forward to Dare to be a David.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thank you NurseBarb for this kind review. I hope that you enjoy all of the series. You are very encouraging. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

It's really nice to see you enjoying your writing so much, and that its being appreciated.

I'm not into Bible stuff, but I respect your faith very much, and the strength it gives you.

Best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks Ted, I enjoy writing about many subjects, but the Bible is my favorite book. Just full of wonderful and historical accounts. I am thankful to have a handbook on how to live, Lord knows we need one. :-) Carolyn

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Thank you for these wonderful biblical stories that carry a testimony of the relationship with The Lord.i wish I had your orderly manner Carolyn, then I might actually have a plan! I just do things haphazardly, as I feel "moved" well written, Carolyn. Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Dear Roy,
Thanks for these dear comments. I find that a short book keeps me focused, I can still write on other things but a particular subject allows for inspiration. I love your work and see nothing wrong with the way you present it. :-)
Love, Carolyn

reply by royowen on 23-May-2014

You're so lovely, Carolyn, I'll show this to my wife! Blessings, Roy.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Nice photo that captures my attention. Personally, I think the series will do very well. Whether people admit it or not, the Word of God improves our lives no matter how you look at it. I like what you said about the word "all". I'll be looking for the postings. To God be the glory.

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 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thank you RR,
Dare to be a David, and Jonah, are already posted. I hope you enjoy the series.
:-) Carolyn