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Look beyond

A plea.

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Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows well and you followed the contest rules. Best wishes! and good luck in the contest.

angel123



 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Your six words made for a powerful impact in your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest...............
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much.
Comment from jadapenn
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A very strong and potent poem. Look beyond the handicaps to see the actual person. Every person is unique, no matter where short or tall, whole or handicapped. They all deserve respect. Well penned and best wishes with the contest. luv jada

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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    Thank you very much.
Comment from Domino 2
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Indeed - being as fit as a fiddle doesn't guarantee awareness of beauty and surroundings, or kindness and love. In fact, they say some handicaps can enhance the senses.

Excellent!

Best wishes, Ted


 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much for your beautiful words.
Comment from LIJ Red
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Though severely handicapped by a six word limit, you push your meaning through. Well done. Lovely illustration.
The Lord replied, "But you are-are the most perfect hunchback I ever created." (space filler)

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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    Thank you very much.
Comment from tfawcus
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I'm delighted by the powerful use of six words that this contest is producing. Yours is the best I have read yet. The message comes across with such great power. It really makes the reader stop and think. I could just imagine it as a slogan for the year of the disabled or some such awareness raising initiative.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much for your beautiful words.
Comment from adewpearl
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You deliver a significant message in your poem though the rules restrict you to six words
I like the alliterative pairing of handicapped and wholehearted
Brooke

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much,Brooke.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
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What a great and positive outlook, you express with only six words. It is amazing how muck you are able to express with so few words.

Good luck!

Roger, Marilyn's writing partner



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 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much for these beautiful words.
Comment from playinaround
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Very important message and worded so well. Six words is so difficult and you have a full meaning poem here with only six words. I know, because I tried to write several. Thank you for sharing this excellent poem. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Thank you very much.