Spring
Spring brings anticipation for warm weather fun.16 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
Beautifully written flows nice. I like the simpleness of the rhymes. Great picture to top off this write. Good luck with the contest. And can I get a hamburger from the grille too? LOL
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Beautifully written flows nice. I like the simpleness of the rhymes. Great picture to top off this write. Good luck with the contest. And can I get a hamburger from the grille too? LOL
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Oh,yes! Most of us New Englanders, (unless you are a polar bear) focus our dreams on warm, sunny, fragrant, Spring days and anticipate the feeling of warmth, family, friends, sunshine and LOVE! Thank you for the kind words!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your chosen words and vivid images allow the reader to see and feel what spring means to you
the new birth of nature
the spring clean-ups before the summer comes again
good couplet rhyme through out
flows well
cheers ..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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good luck in the contest
your chosen words and vivid images allow the reader to see and feel what spring means to you
the new birth of nature
the spring clean-ups before the summer comes again
good couplet rhyme through out
flows well
cheers ..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Yes, my favorite season of all. Thank you for enjoying my thoughts!
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most welcome..SC
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I'm feeling a little jealous; for as autumn begins to wane winter draws dven closer.
Your clever rhymed couplets describe many of the wonderful things about spring.
Check the third couplet-first line-frolicing = frolicking.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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I'm feeling a little jealous; for as autumn begins to wane winter draws dven closer.
Your clever rhymed couplets describe many of the wonderful things about spring.
Check the third couplet-first line-frolicing = frolicking.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Oh, thank you so much. All of God's seasons are a magnificent gift to us. My feelings are of that there's so much "newness" with Spring, that makes each sunrise a glorious miracle, and to be able to experience the start of so many new births of life is so exciting to me. Thanks for the spell check too! : )
Comment from country ranch writer
A good one for the springtime and I will take some of that barbecue on the grill, I will have a burger well done and a hot dog with mustard and ketchup with onion and pickles all chopped fine and a large glass of teas to wash it down. Please and Thank you
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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A good one for the springtime and I will take some of that barbecue on the grill, I will have a burger well done and a hot dog with mustard and ketchup with onion and pickles all chopped fine and a large glass of teas to wash it down. Please and Thank you
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for enjoying my Spring poem. My favorite season
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mine to but heading to get some zzzzzzzzzzz
Comment from Domino 2
A VERY sweet and enjoyable write about spring, mystery writer.
You highlight many examples of the season with vivid imagery - always a sign of a good writer with excellent imagination.
Best wishes, Ted
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reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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A VERY sweet and enjoyable write about spring, mystery writer.
You highlight many examples of the season with vivid imagery - always a sign of a good writer with excellent imagination.
Best wishes, Ted
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for your review. I love writing!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Good entry for the spring prompt contest. Your rhyming couplets bounce along with all the joys of spring, covering a wide range of spring flings.
The ending is good too with a look ahead to the next season.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Good entry for the spring prompt contest. Your rhyming couplets bounce along with all the joys of spring, covering a wide range of spring flings.
The ending is good too with a look ahead to the next season.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Glad you enjoyed this and thank you!