Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "My Home-Sweet-Home"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from yolieday
I learned about the classic Italian form in your poem. It flowed like my unapologetic household. It serves it's purpose and is designed especially for it's members. Love it. I had to get use to the flow after several reads but I think that added to its authenticity. Thank you for sharing.
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I learned about the classic Italian form in your poem. It flowed like my unapologetic household. It serves it's purpose and is designed especially for it's members. Love it. I had to get use to the flow after several reads but I think that added to its authenticity. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hi and thank you for your lovely feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Cajungirl
Beautiful job with the writing prompt of Home. I'd much rather live in a quaint home than a luxurious house. Home is a place where family share and love. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful job with the writing prompt of Home. I'd much rather live in a quaint home than a luxurious house. Home is a place where family share and love. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thanks cajungirl for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Kingsland
Home is where the heart is. Being a king is over rated. I know, as my last name is Kingsland. Well now... That's enough of my poor humor on this day. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for this excellent piece of poetic art... John
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Home is where the heart is. Being a king is over rated. I know, as my last name is Kingsland. Well now... That's enough of my poor humor on this day. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for this excellent piece of poetic art... John
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you john, glad you enjoyed it! Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment from JB Lynn
Nice "home" tributary poem. The theme that different things make a home feel "perfect" to the different inhabitants is a common one I'm seeing in these answers to the "Home" writing prompt. I think that's because it's true for all of us. Yours sounds like a wonderful perfectly unperfect place. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Nice "home" tributary poem. The theme that different things make a home feel "perfect" to the different inhabitants is a common one I'm seeing in these answers to the "Home" writing prompt. I think that's because it's true for all of us. Yours sounds like a wonderful perfectly unperfect place. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for you great comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)