To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Soul's Silent Sonata"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Nosha17
I understand the analogy completely; I can play the Moonlight Sonata on the piano (haven't played in many years) so, I know that when I play it without practice and due care and attention I fail miserably. Relationships that depend on human input and inspiration can founder and skip a beat in the same way. You have made great choice of lyrical words and imagery to express your thoughts and it was an enjoyable read. Faye
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I understand the analogy completely; I can play the Moonlight Sonata on the piano (haven't played in many years) so, I know that when I play it without practice and due care and attention I fail miserably. Relationships that depend on human input and inspiration can founder and skip a beat in the same way. You have made great choice of lyrical words and imagery to express your thoughts and it was an enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey, I must say that this is an excellent piece of poetry. Gathering melody is so fine so in tune to the words of your column that makes one want to dance. This very romantic poem
Shows your inventiveness and creativeness and how resourceful
Your unique approach to this poem Is very stimulating and inspirational. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone and make the Lord be with you always.
Helen
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Mikey, I must say that this is an excellent piece of poetry. Gathering melody is so fine so in tune to the words of your column that makes one want to dance. This very romantic poem
Shows your inventiveness and creativeness and how resourceful
Your unique approach to this poem Is very stimulating and inspirational. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone and make the Lord be with you always.
Helen
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
What a beautiful message in a wonderful presentation. Very nice complimentary artwork as well.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi
What a beautiful message in a wonderful presentation. Very nice complimentary artwork as well.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
An enchanting piece that one must have a musical ear to appreciate as the author's notes dictate. However, with that said, the spacing of the lines as they cascade down and across a sheet of music paper well illustrates the 'love' nuances of the piece. Excellent.
Regards:
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An enchanting piece that one must have a musical ear to appreciate as the author's notes dictate. However, with that said, the spacing of the lines as they cascade down and across a sheet of music paper well illustrates the 'love' nuances of the piece. Excellent.
Regards:
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. Yes, love has to be attend and cared for. You can not leave it unattended. It will die. Great work.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Yes, love has to be attend and cared for. You can not leave it unattended. It will die. Great work.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from Sankey
Lovely poem my friend. Having mental block as to what Moonlight Sonata sounds like and that should not be so for me. Nice layout and settings. The picture with it is lovely as well. Thanks again my friend.
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Lovely poem my friend. Having mental block as to what Moonlight Sonata sounds like and that should not be so for me. Nice layout and settings. The picture with it is lovely as well. Thanks again my friend.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from faragon
i like the rythm of the poem and the meaning you set forth. It did take me a few minutes to adjust my eyes to both the colors and the way the poem was laid out, but once they adjusted, it flowed easily.
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i like the rythm of the poem and the meaning you set forth. It did take me a few minutes to adjust my eyes to both the colors and the way the poem was laid out, but once they adjusted, it flowed easily.
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Comment Written 01-May-2014
Comment from Marillion
Beautiful stuff, Mikey, and a piece that very much captures the melody and tone of the Moonlight Sonata. Sorry for my absence, my friend, and I'm sorry to say I'm woefully behind on your books. At least I can read this as a one off.
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Beautiful stuff, Mikey, and a piece that very much captures the melody and tone of the Moonlight Sonata. Sorry for my absence, my friend, and I'm sorry to say I'm woefully behind on your books. At least I can read this as a one off.
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Comment Written 01-May-2014