Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Trust, belief in the power greater than and to give your care over into His mighty hand knowing not only that He is able but willing.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

There's moments in life when we can't see 8
What's right in front of us. 6
'Tis in those troubled times we cling 8
Steadfast HIS strength we trust 6

Perhaps an 8686 format would be smoother when read aloud. Revisions meant no disrespect. The drive through pelting rain happened to me once near Sacremento, CA in a tour bus. Had to pull over.

Regards:

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

No disrespect felt. I always appreciate constructive suggestions. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 14-May-2014

Dear Debbie: Great!! We are amongst friends on FS arn't we. Just posted part 2 of 'The Springfield Foal' Am working on another saga..'The Postcard'.

LUV: Steve

Comment from royowen

Excellent

That's my girl, with God "all things are possible" a great encouraging write, Debbie, smooth descriptive language, it had a nice flow and meter, the rhyme and proximate are fine., blessings, Roy.


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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Dianemae

Excellent

There are so many times in our life's when we are traveling blind. It is with the faith that you describe that we continue and succeed. Good poem capturing the thoughts of many.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie