A true friend
Essence poem contest15 total reviews
Comment from WritingsByG
Beautifully put with a good photo. You got the message put over nicely. Simple sentiment expressed well for such complex times. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Beautifully put with a good photo. You got the message put over nicely. Simple sentiment expressed well for such complex times. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
You said it so simply but with great impact. This touched me deeply.
I have such a dear friend, who saw me through my illness. To this day, if I said I need, no matter that we live about 3 hrs apart now, she'd be here for me. There was a time when she held my coffee cup and helped me to drink it with a straw, I shook so badly, and in the middle of a restaurant! She wasn't embarrassed at all - she simply was a friend!
Well done!
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Hi
You said it so simply but with great impact. This touched me deeply.
I have such a dear friend, who saw me through my illness. To this day, if I said I need, no matter that we live about 3 hrs apart now, she'd be here for me. There was a time when she held my coffee cup and helped me to drink it with a straw, I shook so badly, and in the middle of a restaurant! She wasn't embarrassed at all - she simply was a friend!
Well done!
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you Jax for the great review, best wishes, I enjoyed your comments.
Comment from donette1914
very sweet and the photo is so sweet and your poem is also I love your words You sigh at all my fears You dry all of my tears, vey special well done
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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very sweet and the photo is so sweet and your poem is also I love your words You sigh at all my fears You dry all of my tears, vey special well done
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. It has the internal rhymes and the end rhymes are good. It is well presented, too. Good entry for this contest
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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This is well done. It has the internal rhymes and the end rhymes are good. It is well presented, too. Good entry for this contest
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review.
Comment from priyanka n
nice one . brief yet heart touching .though it is brief it has successfuly captured the true esscence of friendship and what a friend should be like ,as it is said a friend in need is a friend indeed ,the same emotion the above lines capture
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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nice one . brief yet heart touching .though it is brief it has successfuly captured the true esscence of friendship and what a friend should be like ,as it is said a friend in need is a friend indeed ,the same emotion the above lines capture
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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thanks for the very encouraging review.