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Thirty poems in Thirty Days

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Comment from l.raven
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Hi Debbie, so very well written...and so very true...I try to help people every chance I get...it is the way God wants us to be...I love your poem...and a beautiful picture

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you. Hugs~Debbie
reply by l.raven on 19-May-2014
    you are so welcome...luff
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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It is important to be accepted by others but it is very important to accept ourselves. I love the last lines, be kind to someone today, it will come back ten-fold your way.
Love, Carolyn

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from Chocolate Chip
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I liked this piece very much. The words used to describe feelings seems autobiographical. Either way, the flow & rythme coexisted making it a smooth read. All in all, this is a positive & very effective effort on a subject that is delicate, to say the least.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you~Debbie