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Thirty poems in Thirty Days
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Comment from
l.raven
Hi Debbie, so very well written...and so very true...I try to help people every chance I get...it is the way God wants us to be...I love your poem...and a beautiful picture
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
reply by l.raven on 19-May-2014
you are so welcome...luff
Comment from
Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
It is important to be accepted by others but it is very important to accept ourselves. I love the last lines, be kind to someone today, it will come back ten-fold your way.
Love, Carolyn
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
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Chocolate Chip
I liked this piece very much. The words used to describe feelings seems autobiographical. Either way, the flow & rythme coexisted making it a smooth read. All in all, this is a positive & very effective effort on a subject that is delicate, to say the least.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
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