National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Why not Peace?"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
16 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
Unfortunately Chicago remains one of the most violent cities in America Something really should be done Tomorrow hopes we have learned something from yesterday.
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Unfortunately Chicago remains one of the most violent cities in America Something really should be done Tomorrow hopes we have learned something from yesterday.
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really don't think religious differences are the cause. I think it's humans desire for greed and power. I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a good job writing it.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I really don't think religious differences are the cause. I think it's humans desire for greed and power. I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a good job writing it.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from Dianemae
There is always hope. But as your poem states there are many who don't think of the outcome of their actions and their thoughts. Hope just might not be enough. But with great writings like your poem I will keep hoping.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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There is always hope. But as your poem states there are many who don't think of the outcome of their actions and their thoughts. Hope just might not be enough. But with great writings like your poem I will keep hoping.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from Literature Dragon
Recently, there's like civil war in Ukraine and Russia, shootings in Detroit every day as the same goes in other states and cities. This is a subject we all need to talk about. Thanks for the thoughts. The font text is interesting because I haven't been able to change mine, but that may be because I write on a phone... The picture seems a little hypocritic, but I like it as it reminds me of Call Of Duty and virtual violence is at least better than actual violence. Again, great message.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Recently, there's like civil war in Ukraine and Russia, shootings in Detroit every day as the same goes in other states and cities. This is a subject we all need to talk about. Thanks for the thoughts. The font text is interesting because I haven't been able to change mine, but that may be because I write on a phone... The picture seems a little hypocritic, but I like it as it reminds me of Call Of Duty and virtual violence is at least better than actual violence. Again, great message.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from Jay Squires
Perhaps, if we each took a few minutes of silence
[I believe you mean "tried to GET along" don't you?]
Your poem opens up endless possibilites for speculation, Debbie. And that's what good poetry should do, Correct?
I don't know what, if anything can be done politically. I think, at bottom, each individual needs to take those "few minutes of silence".
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Perhaps, if we each took a few minutes of silence
[I believe you mean "tried to GET along" don't you?]
Your poem opens up endless possibilites for speculation, Debbie. And that's what good poetry should do, Correct?
I don't know what, if anything can be done politically. I think, at bottom, each individual needs to take those "few minutes of silence".
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Yes, I fixed that. Thank you for your kind review, my friend~Debbie
Comment from ronnie k
Powerful, sincere message, this work must be read with a full scope of the love of poetry for entertainment is good and when carrying a message it become great (line 3 get alone)
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reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Powerful, sincere message, this work must be read with a full scope of the love of poetry for entertainment is good and when carrying a message it become great (line 3 get alone)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie