Blinded by Your Light.
Putting myself first now.16 total reviews
Comment from suep
Very insightful and beautifully written. Good words of wisdom in there. It is best to find and love ourselves first. So many don't and when it doesn't work out their world falls apart. When we are blind to ourselves we are more easily blinded by others. We are in a better position to find true and lasting love when first we know and love ourselves. Great work ... best wishes in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Very insightful and beautifully written. Good words of wisdom in there. It is best to find and love ourselves first. So many don't and when it doesn't work out their world falls apart. When we are blind to ourselves we are more easily blinded by others. We are in a better position to find true and lasting love when first we know and love ourselves. Great work ... best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for your very kind and insightful review suep. I truly appreciate it. Love n peace :) x
Comment from Pegcook
Love the illustration. The song is nice, although this listener has some difficulty catching all of the lyrics. The rhymes work well together. The last line of the poem, the decision "to love the person that's me" is very wise.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Love the illustration. The song is nice, although this listener has some difficulty catching all of the lyrics. The rhymes work well together. The last line of the poem, the decision "to love the person that's me" is very wise.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks you so much pegcook. Your review is appreciated. :) x
Comment from mfowler
This theme has been worked really well in this poem about love lost. It shows a woman seeking to break away, to find herself again after giving all to a relationship. I enjoyed your verse with its lovely rhythm evoking emotion, and your clever use of alliteration in making the words flow smoothly.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This theme has been worked really well in this poem about love lost. It shows a woman seeking to break away, to find herself again after giving all to a relationship. I enjoyed your verse with its lovely rhythm evoking emotion, and your clever use of alliteration in making the words flow smoothly.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Many thanks mfowler, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :) x
Comment from rouskin
Excellent artwork and strong emotions Memorable ending :
It's time to break out and set myself free,
I'll take time to love the person that's me.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Excellent artwork and strong emotions Memorable ending :
It's time to break out and set myself free,
I'll take time to love the person that's me.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for your lovely review rouskin :) x
Comment from jadedecker
I think this is an extremely good poem. It is so short but says so much. You used fantastic words and this is the first poem I've actually liked on here, congrats.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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I think this is an extremely good poem. It is so short but says so much. You used fantastic words and this is the first poem I've actually liked on here, congrats.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for your review :) x
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was a really nice poem, the rhyming was good and I liked the couplets style, some great alliteration also, my favourite pair were the last ones, good writing,
Andrew
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This was a really nice poem, the rhyming was good and I liked the couplets style, some great alliteration also, my favourite pair were the last ones, good writing,
Andrew
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks for your lovely review x
