Comment from royowen

Excellent

Very clever senryu. That's turning it around! I must have missed that
'period ' in my life! A good ambivalent poem! Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Clever! Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

Thank you for the humor it mad my night complete. Smiling I can agree with you 100% Thank you for putting it in writing now its official its not us its them. Good thinking and sharing. Terrie

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Debbie, LOL...I think there are some men that would disagree...LOL...very clever and well thought of...a great poem...saw the title and had to read it...so glad I did...luff Lindaxxpp

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you. I hope I didn't offend too many men, LOL. Hugs, Debbie

reply by l.raven on 18-Apr-2014

I don't think so...LOL...you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Oh! Oh! That's a maddening statement -- though true, too true. Men slow down because the women tend to speed up. It's a contrast thing.

LOL, thanks for the eye opening Senyru.

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you. I think you are correct, my friend~Debbie

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Hi Debbie - love it. Clever, witty and oh so true. I did wonder what was happening to my body. I thought I was just getting lazier as I grew older. Cheers - DJ

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, my friend~Debbie