Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is a nicely written chapter and a lovely picture of you and Louise. It seems you badly treated for a long time, I do hope things eventually got better.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

No bad treatment from me mate. How did you get that? Thanks for the review?? The reference to her listening to CD's in the loungeroom was referring back to the bad old days when she was all alone before she met me.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

'Bliss! Our Wonderful Wedding Day!' is a great read.
I like the sound of the piano at the beginning. Beautiful.
--I truly believe that God and Psalm 27 kept you a happily married man.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this story. You looked handsome and she's a beauty.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Hi I think the tune on the beginning belongs on the next chapter I could not get rid of it sorry. Thanks for the lovely review. I hope you enjoyed the Men's choir. Our friend sounded even better on the day.

Comment from gene roush

Good

Another delightful tale of your life.He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that. Why?" I said. He said
This needs to be broken up.

He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that.
Why?" I said.
He said

Is Nora a man or woman? It seems to me that refer to him/her as he and she.
Another spot that can use some work is:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's, when I asked him back in those days
"when will the Lord send the right one along for me?"He replied:
"Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
It could work as:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's.
I'd asked, "When will the Lord send the right one along for me?"
He replied. "Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
The perfect person exists for each of us, if we have Faith and Love in our heart.
Thanks for sharing
Gene

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thanks Gene appreciate your wonderful review and AMEN to your last comment. We are glad we had the Eternal match-maker, buddy. God Bless. Will work on the spags much appreciated.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A lovely story of a wedding and a newly forming marriage. I'm glad the shriveled veggies came to an end. A well written story, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thanks Debbie another new FS friend. So glad to be picking up some new ones as the old favourites are dropping off, sadly. Cheers. There are two other pages with rewards if interested. I also added a LInk to my Web site page in Chapter 22 for a song I wrote about the store I worked at in there if interested Someone asked about the song. I tried to put the MP3 on the page but it was too big hence the Web site link.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This is so cute. I see it's a repost. I have no clue how I miss posts from my favorite authors but I am glad I caught it this time. I seriously wonder if people in high places have a clue.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Hi Barbara maybe we weren't friends or fan when I originally wrote it. I can't believe my autobiography is still sitting around, unpublished, but then this new bit would not have made it if it had been. Thanks heaps thanks to Jax Franklin too for a whole lot of crap she picked up in there.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

You should check out Paramount Song and here is an email music@paramountsong.com and I'm Angie as you know and you can use my name as referall. Well done and my greatest thanks to you for being a soldier.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Hi, no soldier, just a servant of the soldiers hehe. Thanks for the idea will look into it.

Comment from RonCraig

Excellent

Hello Geoff,
Well this certainly wouldn't be titled "Another Wonderful Day at the Office" but the conditions there seemed to launch the songwriting/poet side of you.

Keep writing my friend,
Ron

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Well not sure you would have heard the music let me know I can probably share it with you some how. I wrote another song later to the tune of "When Johnny Comes Marching Home" you may have already seen that as these were further edits. Thanks again. Can't remember how much of my autobiography you have seen.

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

I enjoy the way you write and always find it interesting to read. How very fortunate for you to have a great partner all these years to assist in your life work. I find it interesting that one is considered slow just because one follows protocol and one who uses shortcuts gets the glory. I have been in a similar situation so really do understand. Great job and I look forward t the next chapter.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Yes, Sis Louise has certainly been all of that and more. I appreciate your fine review. We may get some more of these out again soon. Seems in these latter days I am getting some more "memories" to add to my book. Glad for you new friends to help me along the way as a lot of it is new to my later Fans.

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I enjoyed this account your attention to detail is brilliant. I love the humour throughout too. Just one thing in authors notes you used the word slag Instead of slang. Great read.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

T%hanks friend. Looks like you found something another good friend missed I just did a major correction after her detailed review so I will go fix the one we both missed. Cheers.

reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Thanks I fixed the "American SLANG" expression.

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

This is an interesting story about the workplace and the bureaucracy that one entails working for an organization. I experienced pressure to put out more work or be more production because I was working according to company guidelines. I could really relate to your frustration with the unrealistic expectations. In my case my co-workers were also cutting corners to make it look as if their work was up to pare. Your story is very well written and thought provoking, which I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 14-May-2016

Thanks new friend. I had a lot of help with some new stuff I only added today and messed up badly. Thanks to an old friend I have now fixed it. You will notice a change if you ever look back through it again. Much appreciated.