Odiferous ode
Ode 5-7-5 entry14 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
This is a very funny little work. Poor dog gets blamed for everything! As far your poem, it is well written and seems to follow the requested poetic format. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
This is a very funny little work. Poor dog gets blamed for everything! As far your poem, it is well written and seems to follow the requested poetic format. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for your review and good wishes!
Comment from JM
Great picture. This is a humorous and happy poem considering the smell that comes to mind is repugnant. The dog looks so "relieved" , reminds me of my dog. I did enjoy this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Great picture. This is a humorous and happy poem considering the smell that comes to mind is repugnant. The dog looks so "relieved" , reminds me of my dog. I did enjoy this poem.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for your review and six stars! Much appreciated!
Comment from emrpoems
Odiferous ode
Owed to an excess of beans
O dog - was it you?
perfect 5=7=5 syllable count which satisfies the requirements for this form.
Good luck in the contest.
Love your picture
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Odiferous ode
Owed to an excess of beans
O dog - was it you?
perfect 5=7=5 syllable count which satisfies the requirements for this form.
Good luck in the contest.
Love your picture
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Many thanks, EMR, for your review and good luck wishes!
Comment from Selina Stambi
I have a doggy who lets go into our faces - oh, how this odiously (mal)odorous ode made me chuckle!
Hope you win!
Have a wonderful rest of the week,
Sonali :)
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
I have a doggy who lets go into our faces - oh, how this odiously (mal)odorous ode made me chuckle!
Hope you win!
Have a wonderful rest of the week,
Sonali :)
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Many thanks, Sonali, for your review and good luck wishes!