The Imagination
look up in the sky...28 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
You would do some wonderful things with your super powers:) I would like many of those things to happen. I hope your poem does/did well in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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You would do some wonderful things with your super powers:) I would like many of those things to happen. I hope your poem does/did well in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Teresa for your nice comments, I appreciate it very much. It came in second place. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from ravenblack
Oh, come on. What about x-ray vision? Yes, it would be great to don that cape and do all things altruistic, but surely you would. I would...as long as I could turn it off (cellulite and Bermuda shorts...brrrrr).
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Oh, come on. What about x-ray vision? Yes, it would be great to don that cape and do all things altruistic, but surely you would. I would...as long as I could turn it off (cellulite and Bermuda shorts...brrrrr).
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks for your review. I had several more lines I wanted to include, especially X-ray vision, but the sponsor only allowed 120 words, so I had to keep it short. Thanks again. Bill
Comment from Selina Stambi
How wonderful it is to be able to escape into one's mind and dream of all the wonderful what-ifs.
The picture made me smile. My daughter has a huge crush on superman!
Worldwide hunger and child predators are uppermost on my list too.
Best wishes in the contest, Bill. :)
Have a lovely week!
Sonali
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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How wonderful it is to be able to escape into one's mind and dream of all the wonderful what-ifs.
The picture made me smile. My daughter has a huge crush on superman!
Worldwide hunger and child predators are uppermost on my list too.
Best wishes in the contest, Bill. :)
Have a lovely week!
Sonali
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, it is fun to daydream of all the wonderful things you could do, if you possessed his powers. Have a great day and week also. Bill
Comment from adewpearl
Superman's powers - add apostrophe for possessive
solid use of abcb rhyme
good alliteration in weapons of war
and fly food
I like the proximate rhyme of pity/guilty
strong use of illustrative examples :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Superman's powers - add apostrophe for possessive
solid use of abcb rhyme
good alliteration in weapons of war
and fly food
I like the proximate rhyme of pity/guilty
strong use of illustrative examples :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks Brooke for your review. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the sonnet rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with weapons/war...would/worldwide...fly/food...where/would...them/there...we/wish. My favorite lines are the last two lines in the second stanza.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Good use of the sonnet rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with weapons/war...would/worldwide...fly/food...where/would...them/there...we/wish. My favorite lines are the last two lines in the second stanza.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your review, I appreciate it very much. Bill
Comment from JavaJunkie
I love this very creative and original take on the super power prompt. I like that you used exactly 120 words, and you did it in a way that it doesn't feel forced or stretched.
Nicely done and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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I love this very creative and original take on the super power prompt. I like that you used exactly 120 words, and you did it in a way that it doesn't feel forced or stretched.
Nicely done and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your great review, I appreciate your nice comments. Also, welcome to this site. Bill
Comment from judester
I wish that you had superpowers too! I like the line about locking in the world leaders until they cried peace. A fun poem about escaping reality and doing good deeds, Bravo Judester
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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I wish that you had superpowers too! I like the line about locking in the world leaders until they cried peace. A fun poem about escaping reality and doing good deeds, Bravo Judester
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments, I appreciate it very much. Have a great day. Bill
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good night superman...
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If you look up in the sky and see something, just remember, it's not a bird or an airplane, it's just me out saving the world...
Comment from rod007
This is a great and powerful poem and is a strong entry for the contest. Good luck. I liked the lines below the best:
"I would gather all the world leaders,
put them together and lock the door
And not let them out until they agreed,
there would never be another war"
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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This is a great and powerful poem and is a strong entry for the contest. Good luck. I liked the lines below the best:
"I would gather all the world leaders,
put them together and lock the door
And not let them out until they agreed,
there would never be another war"
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it very much. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from Debra White
Hi Bill :) Thank you for entering the contest!
I love this entry. Just the tiniest bit of your super-power and the world would be improved no end. I agree with everything you said, it's a shame the world's 'leaders' aren't so imaginative and put an end to the pointless warring.
I also enjoyed your presentation of the poem.
A very strong entry - Good luck in the booth. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Hi Bill :) Thank you for entering the contest!
I love this entry. Just the tiniest bit of your super-power and the world would be improved no end. I agree with everything you said, it's a shame the world's 'leaders' aren't so imaginative and put an end to the pointless warring.
I also enjoyed your presentation of the poem.
A very strong entry - Good luck in the booth. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you Debra for your nice comments, I appreciate your thoughts. Also, thank you for sponsoring this contest. It's great just to write about something different now and then. I do fear for the future of our children. Can you imagine what this world will be like in 25 to 50 years from now. All I can say is, "God help us all." Take care of yourself Debra and have a wonderful day my friend. Bill
Comment from misscookie
I love the message in your poem
It would be great if this could happen.
I like the way your poem flows. to bad life has to be so harsh and cruel.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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I love the message in your poem
It would be great if this could happen.
I like the way your poem flows. to bad life has to be so harsh and cruel.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you misscookie, I'm glad you liked it. It is a shame that the world is in such bad shape and I fear for the future of our children. Take care of yourself my friend. Bill
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I fear for the future also.
You're very welcome, have a blessed week end.
Until next time.
Cookie