National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Together"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
15 total reviews
Comment from Petriesan
Nice imag er y he re. I like the start especially well, with the fire refe re ence
love the picture wit thjs poem, nice marriage
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
Nice imag er y he re. I like the start especially well, with the fire refe re ence
love the picture wit thjs poem, nice marriage
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you have written a wonderful poem which rhymes and flows smoothly. It's descriptions fill the poem with emotions that can be easily felt by the reader.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
Once again you have written a wonderful poem which rhymes and flows smoothly. It's descriptions fill the poem with emotions that can be easily felt by the reader.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely poem and photo. Each brings out the best of the other. Clever use of descriptive words. Progression, rhythm and flow are wonderful. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
Lovely poem and photo. Each brings out the best of the other. Clever use of descriptive words. Progression, rhythm and flow are wonderful. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from royowen
A lovely little poem devoted to love, Debbie, the descriptive language is excellent, the variable rhyme is good and there is a nice even meter. Well done, Roy.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
A lovely little poem devoted to love, Debbie, the descriptive language is excellent, the variable rhyme is good and there is a nice even meter. Well done, Roy.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Take care~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
Such a comfort...that love in the firelight
I enjoyed this poem immensely....
Well written and well done....you used cosy words
God bless.................
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
Such a comfort...that love in the firelight
I enjoyed this poem immensely....
Well written and well done....you used cosy words
God bless.................
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie