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Thirty poems in Thirty Days

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Comment from Petriesan
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Nice imag er y he re. I like the start especially well, with the fire refe re ence

love the picture wit thjs poem, nice marriage

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Once again you have written a wonderful poem which rhymes and flows smoothly. It's descriptions fill the poem with emotions that can be easily felt by the reader.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Exceptional
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Lovely poem and photo. Each brings out the best of the other. Clever use of descriptive words. Progression, rhythm and flow are wonderful. Thanks for sharing, Deb

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from royowen
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A lovely little poem devoted to love, Debbie, the descriptive language is excellent, the variable rhyme is good and there is a nice even meter. Well done, Roy.

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Take care~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
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Such a comfort...that love in the firelight
I enjoyed this poem immensely....
Well written and well done....you used cosy words
God bless.................

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie