Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Cherry Blossom In Your Hair"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry in the form of 'A Triolet' fulfilling all the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Simple and impressive wording.
Smooth and pleasant flow.
Nice rhyming scheme with lively imagery and pictorial quality.
Good alliteration in grubby glasses;living life;butterflies and bees;running round
"Chasing butterflies and bees,
running round without a care.
Living life the way you please,
cherry blossom in your hair."
Excellent!
Good Luck!!
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry in the form of 'A Triolet' fulfilling all the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Simple and impressive wording.
Smooth and pleasant flow.
Nice rhyming scheme with lively imagery and pictorial quality.
Good alliteration in grubby glasses;living life;butterflies and bees;running round
"Chasing butterflies and bees,
running round without a care.
Living life the way you please,
cherry blossom in your hair."
Excellent!
Good Luck!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)