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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Spring's Growth"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
17 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - anxiously waiting for color, yes I am too. Lots of snow has melted but again I wait for tomorrow. Nicely penned with a sense of goodbye to winter and hello to spring.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Dear Debbie - anxiously waiting for color, yes I am too. Lots of snow has melted but again I wait for tomorrow. Nicely penned with a sense of goodbye to winter and hello to spring.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
Your photo is lovely and the entire presentation is beautiful
solid use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in bulbs blossom
and barren branches
lots of good details that remind us of what we've all been longing for during this dreadful and long winter :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Your photo is lovely and the entire presentation is beautiful
solid use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in bulbs blossom
and barren branches
lots of good details that remind us of what we've all been longing for during this dreadful and long winter :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Brooke. It does seem like winter has lasted forever. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
A good, positive outlook on the weather, Debbie. We've still got cold, too, and rain today.
I used to try to sneak past those seed packets when my husband was with me, as he'd buy so many--not bad until you have to plant all of them!
Store (Stores) are displaying seed packets
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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A good, positive outlook on the weather, Debbie. We've still got cold, too, and rain today.
I used to try to sneak past those seed packets when my husband was with me, as he'd buy so many--not bad until you have to plant all of them!
Store (Stores) are displaying seed packets
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Oops. Thanks for catching that. I changed that line several times--I started with store shelves, but didn't really like it. Take care. Hugs, Debbie
Comment from royowen
You must be writing these poems by faith, Debbie! Sometimes the tentacles of the season(s) won't let go, they're almost sentient beings! Your'e literary illustrations in this work evokes vivid and beauteous images of things to come! Well done, Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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You must be writing these poems by faith, Debbie! Sometimes the tentacles of the season(s) won't let go, they're almost sentient beings! Your'e literary illustrations in this work evokes vivid and beauteous images of things to come! Well done, Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, my friend. Enjoy your day~Debbie
Comment from JavaJunkie
Love the picture and the poem. Is farmer's supposed to be possessive? And in the second to last line store should be stores.
Love the flow, and the line petals of all hues are awesome...that put a smile on my face:)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Love the picture and the poem. Is farmer's supposed to be possessive? And in the second to last line store should be stores.
Love the flow, and the line petals of all hues are awesome...that put a smile on my face:)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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You are so right. Thanks for catching that. Glad you enjoyed my poem~Debbie
Comment from JM
This is a nice little poem that speaks about our anxious anticipation of Spring. Nice flow and even nicer picture. short and to the point.
My favorite line is "Farmers awaken from winter's bleak, planting will soon be at its peak".
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This is a nice little poem that speaks about our anxious anticipation of Spring. Nice flow and even nicer picture. short and to the point.
My favorite line is "Farmers awaken from winter's bleak, planting will soon be at its peak".
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you~Debbie
Comment from camaria
This makes me crave spring. We too are getting a lot of snow and your lovely poem is as refreshing as a spring day. Thanks for tiding me over until we actually see some signs of it here! Couldn't find anything I'd change.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This makes me crave spring. We too are getting a lot of snow and your lovely poem is as refreshing as a spring day. Thanks for tiding me over until we actually see some signs of it here! Couldn't find anything I'd change.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your kind review~Debbie