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The clue is in the title!

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Comment from Muffins
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Powerful statements do not always require 1,000 words. That painful question along with the fading portrait of the man love ones want desperately back is breath taking. I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather and hope writing about it has help you in some way to deal with it. Loved this piece.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much Muffins for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it :) Kindest regards...
reply by Muffins on 01-Apr-2014
    You are very welcome. I will think about this poem for a long time.
reply by Muffins on 02-Apr-2014
    I printed this out because it haunted me so much.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
    Thank you, it's a real compliment that something I wrote touched you.
    When the contest is over and my identity is revealed, if you have the time and inclination, please feel free to look at the short book of poetry in my portfolio dedicated to my Grandad. The book is titled Grandad. Kindest regards...:)
reply by Muffins on 02-Apr-2014
    I will.