Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the "stuck" contest. Being stuck in a bad marriage is a hard thing. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thank you Teresa for your kind feedback and good luck wishes :) Regards, Debra

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm sure glad the days when women were truly stuck are gone. No woman deserves to be second best. Glad you found Mr. Right this time.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thank you Cindy, me too and I agree entirely...! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Starpoet9

Good

This poem as a very swaying rhythm pattern that was both easy to read as well as to the main theme. Very nice for a quickie! star

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thank you :)

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hi Debra

i love the pitta patta of this poem. It is rather sad when we realise that the person we marry turns out to be Mr. Wrong, but hey isn't marriage like fishing? We have to catch a few sprats before we land a magnificent rainbow fish:)

Love your spellbinding

much love
trimple:)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Hi Tracey, thank you for your great feedback... with hindsight, I was way too young to get married the first time around. I had a lot of growing to do and I think he had grown as much as he was ever going to! (In mind not body lol!) Ah well, alls well that ends well! Love, Debs x

reply by trimple on 01-Apr-2014

Life's a funny old thing :)

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

My hero in green uniform showed up and made things right,
unstuck me from my rut and now I'm Mrs Debra White!
Congratulations ! :) I'm going to vote for you
Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Hi rouskin :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes! Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

ah, the allure of the round ball is perplexing to many, but be is small and whit or larger and white or even larger and orange. . .but then there is that oblong thing. . .

anyway. SPorts ought not take the place of human interaction ( Especially with the fairer sex), but to too many, it does.

I trust you are better off now

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Hi :) Much better off now thank you! Alls well that ends well :) Thank you for your feedback, kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I love a man in uniform. My first marriage did not work out either. Then I met an angel. We were married 30 years before he passed away. I made all my mistakes on my first husband. He did not care away. Great work.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Hi Ellie :) Thank you for your great feedback. Glad you got a second chance at happiness :) Kindest regards as always, Debra :)