The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Transparency"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem, written very well. I enjoyed the read from beginning to end. I slipped right by the picture to the poem. It fits very well with your words.
Kat
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem, written very well. I enjoyed the read from beginning to end. I slipped right by the picture to the poem. It fits very well with your words.
Kat
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thanks Kat, I was thinking of you today and hoping you are feeling well. :-) Carolyn
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I have to quit eating burritos. They keep me running to the bathroom. LOL Other than that I'm fine. Thanks for caring, my friend.
Kat
Comment from angelface2
Carolyn, I think this is very well written and perfect for the Acrostic poetry contest. Good luck. The message is quite clear. Giving to our Savior not out of duty but love, as it should be. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Carolyn, I think this is very well written and perfect for the Acrostic poetry contest. Good luck. The message is quite clear. Giving to our Savior not out of duty but love, as it should be. Miss Sally
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Miss Sally, you got it. Thank you for the wonderful review and rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention as I looked at the artwork you choose for your poem' it is a perfect match.
I love the movement of your poem and your words were very interesting and uplifting to read.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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You captured my attention as I looked at the artwork you choose for your poem' it is a perfect match.
I love the movement of your poem and your words were very interesting and uplifting to read.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you misscookie for your kind words. Give Madison a hug for me. :-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome, Madison sends you a kiss and a hug. Have a blessed Sunday.
Comment from tbacha58
Sweet savor of sacrifice
Presented to the Worthy One
As a reasonable service, not duty bound
Such a powerful declaration of honest love to God. So heartfelt when it was penned down by you, I pray you win the contest, as you open eyes of the readers to remain in love with Him, thee Almighty. Well done. Hugs Terry xoxo
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Sweet savor of sacrifice
Presented to the Worthy One
As a reasonable service, not duty bound
Such a powerful declaration of honest love to God. So heartfelt when it was penned down by you, I pray you win the contest, as you open eyes of the readers to remain in love with Him, thee Almighty. Well done. Hugs Terry xoxo
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Hi there, I hope things are well with you. I appreciate your wonderful comments. Hugs right back, Carolyn
Comment from royowen
What a great write! It reads a little like a parable. It gives affirmation to the believer and hope to the seeker! It provides answers to the doubter, and a exhortation to me to be thankful for what I already have! Well done, well written, Bless you, Carolyn. Roy.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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What a great write! It reads a little like a parable. It gives affirmation to the believer and hope to the seeker! It provides answers to the doubter, and a exhortation to me to be thankful for what I already have! Well done, well written, Bless you, Carolyn. Roy.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Hi there dear Roy, Your kind words are such an affirmation of the message in the poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a great Sunday, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
A very beautiful and well written acrostic free verse poem.I enjoyed the spiritual feel of the poem with the great message for the Easter season. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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A very beautiful and well written acrostic free verse poem.I enjoyed the spiritual feel of the poem with the great message for the Easter season. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the great review and best wishes. Have a great Sunday, :-) Carolyn
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You too and you are very welcome.
Comment from ennahanid
The vibrancy of your presentation really pulled me into read. I am a presentation lover...wrong or right that is the way it is plus green is my favorite color. A super word you chose for your acrostic entry and your faith shows and those last two lines rounded off the whole thing beautifully. I wish you luck in throw contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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The vibrancy of your presentation really pulled me into read. I am a presentation lover...wrong or right that is the way it is plus green is my favorite color. A super word you chose for your acrostic entry and your faith shows and those last two lines rounded off the whole thing beautifully. I wish you luck in throw contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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What a neat review you have given this one. I am delighted you found so much to enjoy, even the color green. :-) Thank you so much, Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn - nicely penned acrostic with great message - I loved your last line.
I would suggest aligning this to the left margin, that way the straight line will show your title for the acrostic better.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Dear Carolyn - nicely penned acrostic with great message - I loved your last line.
I would suggest aligning this to the left margin, that way the straight line will show your title for the acrostic better.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Dear Maureen, I will align just for you. smile. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I was speaking about you to a friend just yesterday. You are on my heart every day. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
Respect and Reverence to the King
Ethereal sustenance it craves
Naught of works lest it should boast
Caught in forever's web of heavens love
Yesterday's transparency slips gently into eternity
And there it remains forevermore. Wonderful write Carolyn and one to read again and again.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Respect and Reverence to the King
Ethereal sustenance it craves
Naught of works lest it should boast
Caught in forever's web of heavens love
Yesterday's transparency slips gently into eternity
And there it remains forevermore. Wonderful write Carolyn and one to read again and again.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much Pam, I been thinkin' about you a lot. I appreciate your wonderful support. (I am working part-time in an art restoration studio, sculpting, repairing and restoring museum pieces, artefact's, fossils etc. I love it, shortens my time to write and review even more, but pays well, couldn't refuse the offer.) Hope you are well and happy. Love, Carolyn
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I am girl. Truly I am. Good for you.