Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

James, hello my friend. I waited until today to send this because I had no sixes left until today. This is well deserved.

I enjoyed this love poem through and through. It is filled with sincere emotions and feelings you have for your better half. In particularly like the first line, "you cause lightening strikes on my heart"!

Well done and best of luck in the contest... John

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi John,
what can I say? Such a noble gesture from someone that I admire makes the pot oh so sweeter.

Thank you so much for such a cracking review, comments and your well wishes... you are definitely appreciated my friend... you know that, right?

With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-rate,
James

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I don't know who you wrote this about but it sounds like a pretty physical and emotional and every kind of connection there is. Great job friend

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi E Liphe,
thank you for your wonderful review and kind comments, most appreciated friend.

With our thoughts we create,
conscious breathing,
James

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece meets the criteria of the Nonet poem as the syllable count descends from nine syllables to one. Good alliteration with forbidden/fruit...so/sweet...glaze/go. Good eye catching photo followed by a clear message.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi RR,
thanks for dropping by my friend, a great review and rating, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beats,
James

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

A brilliant nonet poem here about love, lust and forbidden fruit! The choices of imagery and the clever interplay from 9 syllables to 1 is excellent. Best wishes and good luck, Hatter :)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi Madhatter,
thanks for you kind and generous review, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
increased blood-flow,
James

Comment from L.A.Matthies

Excellent

Nicely done. This is a very thought provoking entry for the Nonet contest. It's so much fun when the mind wanders this way ...good luck :)Linda

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi Linda,
thanks for your kind review and well wishes, most appreciated... may our minds always wander in such a way.

With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beats,
James xx

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Wow! Beautiful artwork and presentation to this sensual, sweet and romantic nonet. I think you had me a "lightening strikes". Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Jmf4119,
thank you for your wonderful review and well wishes, it is most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beats,
James xx

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

This is a very strong romantic poem for the contest. Love is a wonderful thing, if you're one of the lucky ones that find true love. Good luck. Bill

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Bill,
so true my friend... and I am one of the lucky ones... so thanks for the fine review and well wishes, it is appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
the right choice,
James

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A beautiful love nonet, and I like the words and phrases you chose to describe this feeling the beloved stirs in you. A perfect picture to accompany your words.

I stumbled ever so slightly on this line:

You cause lightning strikes inside my heart

It doesn't sound right. I think, maybe you meant:

You cause lightning to strike inside my heart

Good luck in the contest, love, Y.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Yeltel,
thanks for your wonderful review and well wishes, it is appreciated.

Unfortunately the word count wouldn't allow to have your suggestion, as it did sound good... the nonet has only nine syllables in its first line... yours has ten... but thanks anyway... it is the thought that counts... smile))))))

with our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beat,
James xx

reply by Eternal Muse on 29-Mar-2014

then maybe:

"You cause lightning strike inside my heart"

(you have: "you cause lightning strikes inside my heart")

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Yes 'forbidden fruit', do we dare, do we care, enough to accept the consequences of our actions? If I get the message correct, someone is suggesting or hoping for the a 'forbidden fruit' encounter to occur. If we do not have such questions in our lives, are we truly alive? Thank you for a beautiful, contemplative poem.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Victor,
yes, you did get the message... spot on.

Thank you so much for such a fine review and comments, it is appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
a rhythm to sustain,
James

reply by victor 66 on 30-Mar-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

The scent of love is in the air. The flowers seem to bring it on. I feel the beauty of spring fever when I read this and I feel the love.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Bobby Jo,
you must be from one of those places that has been trapped in the cold winter months... wanting to break out... smile)))))

thank you for your wonderfully uplifting review and comments, it is most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
the senses of love,
James xx