Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Lune (beach huts reflect in)"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a clever Lune with an unusual theme. The picture enhances the poem, but the poem does not depend on the picture totally for meaning. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This is a clever Lune with an unusual theme. The picture enhances the poem, but the poem does not depend on the picture totally for meaning. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you Jeanie for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Dianemae
Nice job, beautiful visual. Each word has meaning, always different to the readers. Nature's artistry at her finest.Each reader can have their own beach that this poem makes them remember.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Nice job, beautiful visual. Each word has meaning, always different to the readers. Nature's artistry at her finest.Each reader can have their own beach that this poem makes them remember.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you Dianemea for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Ben Colder
The syllable seems to be there. Nice subject for the contest. I find no fault. The photo enhances the thought. Best to you.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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The syllable seems to be there. Nice subject for the contest. I find no fault. The photo enhances the thought. Best to you.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you Ben. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from angelface2
Very good for a luna. I love the picture depicting your poem. Such a beautiful reflection in the sea. Good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Very good for a luna. I love the picture depicting your poem. Such a beautiful reflection in the sea. Good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you Miss Sally for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)