Puppeteer
Lune19 total reviews
Comment from daniela.albu
This is an excellent poem with such an inspired metaphor the puppets are tied to their karma. The karma of their strings. Is so suggestive, poetic and touching.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This is an excellent poem with such an inspired metaphor the puppets are tied to their karma. The karma of their strings. Is so suggestive, poetic and touching.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ah-h-h-hhhhhhh, very clever, Mystery Poet. karma does play a major role in our lives, I believe. Not only by the ways in which people treat us, but more importantly by the ways in which we treat others.
Wonderfully presented and perfectly constructed lune.
Magnificent message, too! Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Ah-h-h-hhhhhhh, very clever, Mystery Poet. karma does play a major role in our lives, I believe. Not only by the ways in which people treat us, but more importantly by the ways in which we treat others.
Wonderfully presented and perfectly constructed lune.
Magnificent message, too! Well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. True karma does play an important role in our life.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Petriesan
good luck in the contest
tied to their karma. . . .
is that us? We have seen the enemy within?
really strong image for so few syllables
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
tied to their karma. . . .
is that us? We have seen the enemy within?
really strong image for so few syllables
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.yes we are for most part like that arent we?
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great lune - I liked the puppeteer/karma - very unique. It is written with the perfect syllable count of 5-3-5. Good luck to you.
Teresa
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This is a great lune - I liked the puppeteer/karma - very unique. It is written with the perfect syllable count of 5-3-5. Good luck to you.
Teresa
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from NamastaLee
This lune has a lot of depth of meaning. Beautiful imagery. I love the idea of strings tying us to our karma, and those strings being pulled by a ''higher being'', if you will. A+. :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This lune has a lot of depth of meaning. Beautiful imagery. I love the idea of strings tying us to our karma, and those strings being pulled by a ''higher being'', if you will. A+. :)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much for your generous and beautiful comments,.
Comment from zanya
M-M-M interesting I wonder is that really the story of our human life journey despite how we feel that we 'manage' and control our own destiny?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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M-M-M interesting I wonder is that really the story of our human life journey despite how we feel that we 'manage' and control our own destiny?
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Yes, for most part of our life aren't we like that? .We sure do have the illusion of managing everything ourselves.
Comment from judester
A great lune. How true that we are connected to our karma (good and bad) by strings. Great imagery to think about and the illustration is spot on, cheers Judester
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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A great lune. How true that we are connected to our karma (good and bad) by strings. Great imagery to think about and the illustration is spot on, cheers Judester
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Little Miss History
This lune is formatted correctly. The picture fits the subject perfectly. One question....the puppeteer is pulling the strings and controlling the actions. If the actions that result are tied to their karma, meaning the dolls, do the actions that result reflect the desires of the puppeteer or the dolls that are being manipulated?
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This lune is formatted correctly. The picture fits the subject perfectly. One question....the puppeteer is pulling the strings and controlling the actions. If the actions that result are tied to their karma, meaning the dolls, do the actions that result reflect the desires of the puppeteer or the dolls that are being manipulated?
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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The puppeteer's.the actions are tied to the dolls' karma.Dolls alas have no say.( fatalism has a negative effect ,but it is very convenient when things don't go our way .blame it all on the devine puppeteer so that one need not self destruct with thoughts of failure etc etc)Thank you for this beautiful review.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a clever Lune, and it is spectacularly presented with the art work. Form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of this contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This is a clever Lune, and it is spectacularly presented with the art work. Form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of this contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much for this lovely review