Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Early Bird"The clue is in the title!
18 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
This is too cute and you found the perfect pic!
You had me laughing - and that's a huge feat for such a little poem!
All the best in the contest, Debra. Nice to meet you. :)
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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This is too cute and you found the perfect pic!
You had me laughing - and that's a huge feat for such a little poem!
All the best in the contest, Debra. Nice to meet you. :)
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hello Sonali, lovely to meet you too :) Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both and am thrilled to share a chuckle with you! Kindest regards... x
Comment from manicblue
That's funny. Poor birdie - a smorgasbord of worms all gone. I'll bet the other birds banned him for being greedy. I wish you well in this contest. Great entry.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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That's funny. Poor birdie - a smorgasbord of worms all gone. I'll bet the other birds banned him for being greedy. I wish you well in this contest. Great entry.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi manicblue :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from LilHippie
Cute little, chubby little, greedy little birdie! So adorable, really. THe photo and your poem. The little ones are hard to judge, but this one is easy. Cause you made me laugh and smile. And cause I can picture the little one chowing down (well don't want to picture that too intensely) but anyway, very cute indeed.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Cute little, chubby little, greedy little birdie! So adorable, really. THe photo and your poem. The little ones are hard to judge, but this one is easy. Cause you made me laugh and smile. And cause I can picture the little one chowing down (well don't want to picture that too intensely) but anyway, very cute indeed.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi LilHippie :) Thank you for your great fun review! Glad you enjoyed :) Kindest regards...
Comment from l.raven
OMG, What a fat little guy...I guess he/she did get all worms...LOL...but look how very cute...love your poem...and a precious picture...
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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OMG, What a fat little guy...I guess he/she did get all worms...LOL...but look how very cute...love your poem...and a precious picture...
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi Linda :) Thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always...:)
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very funny poem. This one made me laugh. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The picture accentuates this poem well. Very funny.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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This was a very funny poem. This one made me laugh. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The picture accentuates this poem well. Very funny.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi :) Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and generous 6 star award :) I appreciate both and am glad that you enjoyed this little 575 so much! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from bard owl
He certainly is all fluffed out, isn't he? Must be cold outside and a fresh breakfast always takes so good, no wonder the little guy overate. Excellent take on this contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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He certainly is all fluffed out, isn't he? Must be cold outside and a fresh breakfast always takes so good, no wonder the little guy overate. Excellent take on this contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi bard owl :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Lysa Schuler
I love this poem very much. It was very cute and funny. I actually laughed today. thank you for brightening what would have been an awful day. Good humor, and writ.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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I love this poem very much. It was very cute and funny. I actually laughed today. thank you for brightening what would have been an awful day. Good humor, and writ.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi Lysa :) Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. I'm sorry that you had an awful day but its wonderful to know that I gave you a laugh... I hope tomorrow brings you a better day. Kindest regards...x
Comment from Cajungirl
Hahaha, Very funny I love the picture, too. An excellent 5 7 5 poem. It looks like he not only caught all the worms, he ate them all. LOL Good luck.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Hahaha, Very funny I love the picture, too. An excellent 5 7 5 poem. It looks like he not only caught all the worms, he ate them all. LOL Good luck.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Thank you Cajungirl for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
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