Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Could this be a touch of global warming? Al Gore would love this poem. Bill Clinton would promote it. Great contest piece. Best to you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review, it's Kili

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Terrific 5-7-5. I love how she looks below at the plains.

Favorite line: ermine wrapped ice queen.

Artwork is terrific and really does showcase your poem.

AT=/

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. it's Kili

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an interesting personification of a landscape covered with snow and ice, personified as an "ermine wrap ice queen." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review, it's Kili.

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

I love your poem, with it's unique word choices that paint a lovely African scenario, but I cannot guess what the subject might be. The phrase "Ice at the Equator" is original & creative. Could this be Mount Kilimanjaro? Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

yes,it's kili, thanks for the review barleygirl

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Where is there ice at the equator? Mount Kilimanjaro? Oh, I thought of ice in a glass as you cross the equator ...going through the Panama Canal and the captain dressing as king Neptune...that's where your poem took me. But I beat to a different drum :o)
God bless...I liked it

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

yes, it's kili, thanks for the review