Comment from Michaelk

Excellent

Very nice story. So was this God's answer, or was the other guy just mistaken identity, or something more sinister that she just barely escaped? Your story could have gone many different directions. It was well written and descriptive, with a nice twist at the end. Good job for only having one hundred words to work with. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh! There was a very pleasant surprise in this little package, and I enjoyed it very much. Quite a challenge to tell a full story in 100 words. Good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Now there's a story to tell the grandchildren! LOL
"How I met your grandfather. . ."
Very cute story, with a pleasant surprise twist ending :-)

Nice write!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from 4hisglory

Excellent

Nice little story. Mistaken identity it seems? I had to read it a couple times to get it. Maybe give us a little more hint in the last lines? I know it's hard with so few words.

Blessings, LaVonne

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks so much. It was hard and I tried to throw in he tugged at her red scarf to show that he was the one she was supposed to me. :)

Comment from akulkumol

Excellent

A dream come true....as if was a reality...nice story in a few words like 100.....thanks to the internet ...people getting their unfound love ...if it happens for all life would be beautiful...loved reading it...

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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Thanks so much!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Heh...whoops! How embarrassing.
Well, there is a bright side to this dark cloud. At least Sheila found out before something happened between her and the imposter. Besides, he was a jerk anyway. Perhaps the second "Steve" will work out much better, we hope!

Well done, nice ending.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Ha, Funny but it happens. I know that happened to me once. You did an excellent job of writing an actual Flash Fiction tale. That is what the prompt asked for. Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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Thanks so much!