Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a great blank verse poem for the contest. Your meter seems to be very good and in the correct form. Good luck.
~Teresa~

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 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thank you so much Teresa for your wonderful feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! :) Kindest regards...

Comment from simplyteresa

Excellent

This is such a strong emotional poem. I have seen loved ones suffer from dementia and truly this seems to be the hardest of them all. The slow journey of torment they travel knowing where it will finally take them.

Bless you for sharing such an emotionally stirring piece. The artwork you paired with your work is such a peaceful fit.

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 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, I appreciate your lovely comments :) Kindest regards...