Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Holy cow (no pun intended, dear Nellie!), I can't stop laughing! This has to be one of the funniest clean limericks I think I have ever seen.

Perfect! I really hope you do well with this in the contest. You certainly deserve to...

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Hi Dean :) That is such a lovely thing to say and Nellie isn't offended one bit! Thank you so much for your great comments - I'm honoured :) Kindest regards, Debra x

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Mar-2014

You are very welcome, Debra. I'm really glad I decided to forgo this contest now, I almost didn't. There's no way I could have topped this!

Great work.

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

I loved this limerick it was witty and funny , it was fast paced and I loved the picture that went with it, it conjured up some wonderful mental images thank you

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Thank you Andrew for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Connie C

Exceptional

This one really got a chuckle out of me, Debra. Very nice rhythm throughout and great rhyme too. I wish you all the best in the contest, my friend.
Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Hi Connie :) Wow! Thank you so much for the super 6 stars - I really appreciate it, along with your wonderful feedback. Happy to share a chuckle with you :) Kindest regards as always, Debra xx

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is a wonderful limerick. It made me giggle. Excellent end rhymes and the perfect limerick cadence in your rhythm. The picture compliments the them so well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Hi :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both and am delighted to have shared a giggle with you :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from playinaround

Exceptional

Thank you for the giggle! This is so cute.. love the rhythm and tempo. I had fun reading this one. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Hi playinaround :) Thank you so very much for your wonderful feedback and generous 6 stars!! I appreciate both and am very happy to have shared a giggle with you :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
your few words tell the story well with great images
Nellie was so pleased to find her remote for the tellie tucked in the folds of her belly when she undressed
great alliteration in the "L" "T" words
the rhyme falls into place
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Thank you Smoothicool for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

reply by Smoothiecool on 06-Mar-2014

most welcome..SC

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a wonderful little limerick for the writing prompt. Very clever and humorous. Good luck in the contest:)
~teresa~

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Thank you teresa for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A very well done Limerick and a good contest entry, I like the Rhythm and poetic flow to your work. I think the art work is a good choice for your limerick. Don

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Thank you Don for your great feedback and for sponsoring this fun contest :) Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from evrenios

Excellent

A cute and delightful limerick with a great deal of humor. I liked it!

Your write about the girl named Nelly
who had a remarkable belly
would not be such riot.
if she went on a diet
and ate her toast without jelly.

Elizabeth

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Thank you Elizabeth for your funny review - great limerick! Glad you enjoyed mine! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG, I have lost the remote in many places but never in my belly...very well written and the picture is perfect...I can even tell you where the remote is now...LOL...well said...

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014

Hi linda :) Thank you for your great feedback :) I appreciate it as always, Debra :) x

reply by l.raven on 05-Mar-2014

You are so welcome...xxoo