Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Sweet Pickles and Milk"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from DonandVicki
Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much Don and Vicki, for this kind and encouraging review!
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The reader found this poem to be unique. The author's words are clear and creative. The artwork did not appear - not sure if it is my computer.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent Poem! The reader found this poem to be unique. The author's words are clear and creative. The artwork did not appear - not sure if it is my computer.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you harmony13, for your kindness and encouragement!!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hey, this would have been equally at home in the 'enjoyment of food' contest.
I can see you did have fun with this and I like the dubtle humour of your last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Hey, this would have been equally at home in the 'enjoyment of food' contest.
I can see you did have fun with this and I like the dubtle humour of your last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you Steve!
Comment from royowen
I love the art work in this 5-7-5 poem! A clever take on this limiting poetic discipline! You write about the small things that are the most enjoyable, and you do it very well! Well done, cheers. Roy.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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I love the art work in this 5-7-5 poem! A clever take on this limiting poetic discipline! You write about the small things that are the most enjoyable, and you do it very well! Well done, cheers. Roy.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you Roy!