Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

windswept wrath
wreaking wanton waste
weaving woe

Well, well. Welcome winner.

I found this to be one of the best entries into the contest. Utilizing the "w" forming all your words was creative.

Nicely done all around, John

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks, John, I'm glad you liked all the "W" words. My reasoning was to create a "whoosh-ing" sound, to try and convey the message of strong winds. I'm very happy you picked up on that! Based upon other reviews, it seems to be a "love it-or hate it" sort of thing.

Comment from 4hisglory

Excellent

That's an awesome picture. Very cleaver poem with every word starting with w. I'm sure its weaving a lot of woes for somebody!

Blessings in the contest. LaVonne

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me, LaVonne. I appreciate the thoughtful review.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Had I six stars they would be yours. I lost my hat while reading this one. What a blow. Suck your socks right off your feet. Best to you.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Hah, well, by all means, Ben, get some more socks, my good friend!
I really appreciate your entertaining review. I'm still laughing!

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Excellent alliteration with every word beginning with a "w". Amazing artwork to compliment your theme. This is a clever response to the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks for the read & review, Debi, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me!

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

The poem with the picture of a typhoon-like, or a hurricane
leaves an impression of destruction as it moves along its path. It certainly will cause flooding of homes or streets and fields and, perhaps, causing power outages along cities and plains where it passes.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks, Dom. Tornadoes are very scary things to witness, for sure! The terrifying wrath of Mother Nature's fury! I appreciate the fine review, my friend!

reply by Dom G Robles on 01-Mar-2014

You are welcome,Dean. Dom

Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

Wow awesome video...scary to say the least...your words a fitting frame for this dark power unleashed ... reminds me of the Biblical description of the Day of the Lord ...

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks, Deniz22, I really appreciate your viewpoints, and the fantastic review!

Blessings!

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I live in tornado country. The picture looks real. You are right. This wind does cause a lot of woe. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks very much, nelliesellie. I went through a massive one, back in 1974. Scary!

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
you have the correct components for this one
your few words portray the image of the winds wrath weaving havoc great imagery
good alliteration with all the word starting in "W"
well done
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thanks a million for the wonderful review and for sharing your thoughts with me, Smmothiecool. I truly appreciate it!

reply by Smoothiecool on 01-Mar-2014

most welcome..SC

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Amazing artwork, mystery writer. I'm having trouble taking my eyes off it.

Very clever 'w' alliteration to describe the awesome power of this tornado. Thank goodness I live in England.

Good luck, Ted

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thank you very much, Ted. All the credit for that awe inspiring animation goes to NatureGirl. She allowed me to use it. I'm so happy to hear you caught the meaning behind the W's. I wanted to convey the sounds of wind.

Thanks again, Ted. I appreciate it!

Comment from Val Crisson

Good

While the message of this three/five/three is good, the alliteration makes it seem really forced. In reading the poem, I felt like I was hit over the head with "w"

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thanks you for sharing your opinions with me, Val. Much obliged.