Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Loved"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from ccto12
This is a very sweet poem you've written here, about both spousal love and the love of children. Made me laugh about serenity disappearing when the three children coming scampering in. I liked both stanzas, especially your line "and serenity scuppers". That's not an often used word. The ending line is sweet and affirmative. Great artwork pic.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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This is a very sweet poem you've written here, about both spousal love and the love of children. Made me laugh about serenity disappearing when the three children coming scampering in. I liked both stanzas, especially your line "and serenity scuppers". That's not an often used word. The ending line is sweet and affirmative. Great artwork pic.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Hello :) Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. Your encouragement is very much appreciated! Glad you enjoyed my short free verse :) Kindest regards...
Comment from RGstar
What a beautiful thing to write.
Love the sentiment, loved the image and absolutely love the wording.
I wish you luck with this entry.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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What a beautiful thing to write.
Love the sentiment, loved the image and absolutely love the wording.
I wish you luck with this entry.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Hello Rgstar :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I truly appreciate both! Kindest regards... :)
Comment from James Dooney
oh yes I do like this. Its short and sweet and it just tells the nice story. The picture gels well with it also. I would love to see some more of your work, Bravo !
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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oh yes I do like this. Its short and sweet and it just tells the nice story. The picture gels well with it also. I would love to see some more of your work, Bravo !
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much James for your wonderful encouragement. I'm happy you enjoyed my little free verse.... kindest regards :)