Comment from harmony13

Excellent

An excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well. The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review.

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

A very lively and uplifting piece. Enjoyable and empowering to read. Great overall presentation with words, photo, colors. "I now attract like minded folk" is an excellent line and one reader's should take to heart, but "like-minded" folk is likely what you will draw, so make sure they're a group of helpful rather than hurtful people by being more positive yourself. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

I am pleased you enjoyed my poem

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is such a cool poem I like the picture it reminds me of flash dance the start of the movie good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

I am so pleased you liked it thanks for your review

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Nice contest entry with attractive artwork My favorite lines:so i can master a new way to be choosing to only focus
on meaningful friendships
Best of luck in the contest Really well done

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

I am really pleased with your review and comments

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I wish you luck with this vibrant free verse poem you are entering into the contest. The art and color choice compliment your words beautifully making for a top drawer package here.
This was a pleasant read this morning and I thank you for it - Dinah

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks Dinah for your wonderful review

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That poem sure is a motivational pick-me-up. It is well written as you clearly thought it through. Great visual imagery. Creative. Nice accompanying artwork.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks flor your comments I appreciate it

Comment from califdot

Excellent

I like your poem. It is full of imagery and thought provoking. Your poem causes the reader to think about their own life and where they are headed and what they are going to do with their life. Your poem builds images for the reader, which I mentioned before, is always a good thing to do. Your poem flows nicely and has good rhythm. The poetic devices you have used in this poem are very well done. When I read your poem out loud the cadence is lyrical and strong. You have done a great job. Overall the poem is written very well indeed!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review I am grateful for your encouragement

reply by califdot on 26-Feb-2014

You are very welcome.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece contains a message that defines the word change. Change starts in your heart and in your mind. Once you change your heart and your mind, you can then change your surrounds, acquaintances and so on. This is a positive message that holds my attention from start to finish.

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

I agreed with you that it is about change and this comes about after awareness thanks for your great comments