Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece meets the criteria of the Limerick poem as this piece has the correct number of lines totaling five. Good end rhyming. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with humor.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Thank you for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...

Comment from darla1977

Excellent

Lol. This is a wonderfully written humorous piece! It was very entertaining! Great rhyming! I loved it!!! Nice picture choice as well!
Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback :) I appreciate it! Kindest regards...

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

There was once a young lady named Gert, A man's name in Norway
who was nought but a terrible flirt. naught
Let the gents have a squeeze
of her pert double-D's, Great line
but wore steel knickers under her skirt. Very funny

Well done. Deserves a 6 but alas I'm out.

Regards:

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Hi Stephen :) Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, I really appreciate your comments and have altered nought to naught! Kindest regards...:)

reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 19-Feb-2014

Dear ?: well deserved. Do drop by sometime. Just posted first 4 of 7 cantos on an Irish ancient saga. Thanks.

With Respect: Steve C

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

This contest is one of my favorites to read here on FanStory. Most limericks are quite unique and humorous. Yours fits right into the mold ...

Fun read. Good entry for the contest and best of luck. John

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you John for your great feedback and good luck wishes. Both are appreciated! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering, mystery writer, though as sponsor I know who you are. :-)

Perfect bawdy theme without being at all gross.

Perfect rhymes, and limerick meter, except last line.

I'd suggest for better flow:

'but-steel-KNICK-ers-were-UN-de-her-SKIRT' - this retains the [da-da-DUM-da-da-DUM-da-da-DUM emphasis pattern]

Very funny and deserves to contend.

Good luck, Ted



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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Hi ted :) Thank you so much for your great feedback, good luck wishes, expert advice (taken!) and for sponsoring this fun contest. Kindest regards (as always!) :)