Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

A really great poem! Really cute and very sweet. Couldn't help but smile while reading this poem, and a cute pic too! And thanks a lot for introducing me to a form of poetry I didn't know of! And best of luck for the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014

Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

What's behind that door? Surely Mother does not really need to know. LOL

Well written, humorous poem you have here. It is so funny how much of a mess a little one can make in a short period of time. Best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014

Thank you cajungirl for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! It's true that a room can become a pig-sty in 5 minutes flat but it takes so much longer to put it all away again! Kindest regards :)

reply by Cajungirl on 13-Feb-2014

You are very welcome

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem gave me a laugh first thing in the morning, the picture is priceless. Your poem paints a picture we all can relate to. Well done.

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014

Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! So glad you enjoyed the poem :) Kindest regards...