Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "In Shadow"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
It is ironic that something bright enough to be described as dazzling would end up making one blind. I notice you took advantage of the option to use the 17 syllables without the usual 5-7-5 arrangement. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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It is ironic that something bright enough to be described as dazzling would end up making one blind. I notice you took advantage of the option to use the 17 syllables without the usual 5-7-5 arrangement. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you Jeanie for your thoughtful comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) I have just altered my entry... if you have the time or inclination, could you please give me your opinion on the edit. Thank you in advance...