The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Geoffossary, Geoffosophy & Geoffese"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from sunao
This was so wonderful. I do not know you personally but I think that you must be a very interesting person with a charming personality. Thank you so much for writing this. It was a very interesting read for me. I really enjoyed this. Thank you so much once again and have a lovely day.
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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This was so wonderful. I do not know you personally but I think that you must be a very interesting person with a charming personality. Thank you so much for writing this. It was a very interesting read for me. I really enjoyed this. Thank you so much once again and have a lovely day.
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Thanks new friend not sure we have read each other before but you make mee feel like we should be friends. I trust you will delve back into my Autobiography of which this was the last chapter except for the Foreword. I will look for you. Thanks so much.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh dear you had me laughing so hard reading these that i had to go back through and reread the middle and i thoroughly enjoyed the crystal bowels.lol
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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LOL oh dear you had me laughing so hard reading these that i had to go back through and reread the middle and i thoroughly enjoyed the crystal bowels.lol
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Glad you liked this Barb. And I have appreciated you coming with me through my complete Life Story. I only need to do one repair to a chapter and the Foreward and some picture for a chapter 1 or 2 back.Thanks heaps.
Comment from seaglass
I saw no errors in this final piece. overall, you have an interesting biography. Of course it's far from over, as you are still living life and continuing on your journey. Have a nice weekend and God Bless.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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I saw no errors in this final piece. overall, you have an interesting biography. Of course it's far from over, as you are still living life and continuing on your journey. Have a nice weekend and God Bless.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thanks seeing I have had some further good reviews and some interesting suggestions for improvement we are not over yet for more reasons that you have stated hehe. Tnanks
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Great, I'm glad you are getting productive feedback
Comment from moonpaste
This reminds me of something a dad would crack out at a dinner party to embarrass his children . The thing is i do love a good cheesy joke. So nice work. I have one for you . What did the cheese say to itself in the mirror? Halloumi! Haha . I'm sorrt
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reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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This reminds me of something a dad would crack out at a dinner party to embarrass his children . The thing is i do love a good cheesy joke. So nice work. I have one for you . What did the cheese say to itself in the mirror? Halloumi! Haha . I'm sorrt
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Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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OK glad you liked it.
Comment from butchcates
Funny stuff. I enjoy a play on words and like Sankey's sense of humor.
Being a redneck from Mississippi, USA sometimes I have to think for a minute to get the point. Our expressions differ somewhat, but I find the Australian humor quite funny.
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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Funny stuff. I enjoy a play on words and like Sankey's sense of humor.
Being a redneck from Mississippi, USA sometimes I have to think for a minute to get the point. Our expressions differ somewhat, but I find the Australian humor quite funny.
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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hey Bro thanks for getting on board you have come in on the end of the book hehe! Great review
Comment from Selina Stambi
Today I learned some expressions in Geoffese ... a new language, by Jove!
What a great way to end your book, my friend - imaginative and clever. A wonderful suggestion from your pal.
My mum suffers from diverticulosis - what are the odds that you both do. It's not a funny condition to have to deal with. Laughter is the best medicine, I suppose ... even for Crystal Bowels!
Have a wonderful week, Geoff.
Sonali
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Today I learned some expressions in Geoffese ... a new language, by Jove!
What a great way to end your book, my friend - imaginative and clever. A wonderful suggestion from your pal.
My mum suffers from diverticulosis - what are the odds that you both do. It's not a funny condition to have to deal with. Laughter is the best medicine, I suppose ... even for Crystal Bowels!
Have a wonderful week, Geoff.
Sonali
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thanks for this. Yes funny how we both suffer Diverticulosis. I think I mentioned someplace how I had a couple of falls in my bath (probably something to do with the yet undiagnosed Vertigo problem.) The Occupational Therapist who was helping Louise with her various problems for her Cerebral Palsy suggested getting rid of the bath and one other also discouraged me from anymore baths (I miss it believe me)...so I had the bath ripped out and we now have our own potties. I think you had read where we converted the third bedroom into a 'Ensuite' Bathroom for Louise. It used to be a funny scenario I would be working in my study, thinking about Nature nagging at me to 'take care of business' then I would hear Louise in her wheelchair coming down the hall and realise I just had to go! (back before potty No 2 was installed) These days it still happens that way but I forget we each have our own now hehe. (if you want some pictures of the bathrooms let me have an e-mail)Can we see another chapter here? Have a look at Bliss chapter a lot more added and some dialogue as Mikey has recommended and probably yourself!
Comment from Dianemae
The English language is bad enough, but you have found a way to make it fun. The sad part, some people don't see anything wrong with the spelling or these words. Good luck with your book.
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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The English language is bad enough, but you have found a way to make it fun. The sad part, some people don't see anything wrong with the spelling or these words. Good luck with your book.
Comment Written 10-May-2014
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Hi there new friend. Appreciate your review. I had only just added some extra this morning so decided to put it up again. Hope you might find the time to go back to the start and read through...and comment some more of course. What part of the globe are you from? I know in America except for perhaps Boston they have ruined the English language, for good, I mean forever! I won't get into our 'strine' Down Under, and how we have murdered the Queen's English, of course. Typical Colonials huh!Do I know you by any chance?
Comment from michaelcahill
I know you have more of these!! That looks pretty good with all those numbers in a row though. I know you got some twists and turns to go still. But, this has really taken shape since the beginning and is in top form now. Great job. mikey
Just saying hello and to let you know I AM READING THESE. LOL I've just reviewed all of them already. Just shaping up tip top though. I laughed that you like the phrase "libtard". HA! I like it too. We're great fun and make a lot of noise. Just don't leave us in charge!!!! LOL mike
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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I know you have more of these!! That looks pretty good with all those numbers in a row though. I know you got some twists and turns to go still. But, this has really taken shape since the beginning and is in top form now. Great job. mikey
Just saying hello and to let you know I AM READING THESE. LOL I've just reviewed all of them already. Just shaping up tip top though. I laughed that you like the phrase "libtard". HA! I like it too. We're great fun and make a lot of noise. Just don't leave us in charge!!!! LOL mike
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Thanks mate. Appreciate you coming by being such a busy guy yourself. Thinking of doing an Intro for the book and getting a friend to read and do a 'Foreword' and all. Still a major edit and will have more pictures in the printed book.
Comment from GWinterwin
Interesting writing here my friend. Some things that are funny and I never thought of how they sounded before. The Irish rolling pin look pretty big in the picture.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Interesting writing here my friend. Some things that are funny and I never thought of how they sounded before. The Irish rolling pin look pretty big in the picture.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Hi Bro did the pin come out big on your side have to see if I can reduce it notice the square nature of it hence Irish ok! I don't know how much of what I write comes out different 'up and over" from "Down Under" thanks for the review.
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Hey Bro I just replaced the rolling pin with a smaller version see what you think now.
Comment from judiverse
Great humor in this. I think kids in particular like these fun word plays. I especially like "You can't have your kyak and eat at two." We would spell it Crookshank in the U.S., I believe, but the name is associated with someone having a cooked leg and limp. It seems like different parts of the country make their own contributions to these fun words. Very enjoyable. In your line "and it's doors opened," you don't need the apostrophe, just its. judi
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Great humor in this. I think kids in particular like these fun word plays. I especially like "You can't have your kyak and eat at two." We would spell it Crookshank in the U.S., I believe, but the name is associated with someone having a cooked leg and limp. It seems like different parts of the country make their own contributions to these fun words. Very enjoyable. In your line "and it's doors opened," you don't need the apostrophe, just its. judi
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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bad habit with the "It's" thing sorry. Always stuck on the abbreviation for 'it is' for some unknown reason hehe thank God for the editors if I ever get published huh! Thanks for the great review, friend.
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You're so welcome. Sankey. My nephew writes for an online newspaper and always has trouble with its and it's. judi
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Right but I do thinkj our so call ed mistake is out of the idea of the possessive nature of the it in circumstances like the lift or elevator being the 'it' and the doors belonging to the elevator so in that case maybe the it's is not all that wrong because the door are "it's" ie the elevator's doors, belong to the elevator.
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I hear "lift" so much in watching British TV shows that the word sounds natural to me. I still prefer our "parking lot" to "car park." judi
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Hi there, just marked your 30th review of my Little Dog book. Thought you might be interested. Acknowledgement page coming up in the book for all my reviewers and hoping some of you still on FS can tell me how to contact quite a few who have left. 6:20am Sunday here. Chiz.
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I can't believe you did that. I review some people who post two poems a day. It must be a phenomenal number of reviews I've written for them. judi
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I probably won['t do this for all my books just this one. ( I mean the Acknowledgement page thing.)
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Good luck with it. judi