Comment from LorraineK

Excellent

What a sweet and tender love joined in the union of marriage to make it lasting. Loved your poem. How thankful I am for my husband of 40 years. LorraineL

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Lorraine.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

You have written a wonderful little poem for the love contest. Your word count is perfect. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

This was a lovely sentiment dedicated to your wife. Nice image of writing on the sand, though writing on sand isn't very permanant. Good luck in the contest--Ted

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014

Neither are most marriages these days, LOL. Thank you, Ted. Actually what I meant by that was, how things in a marriges always change, life has it ups and downs, always shifting like the sand. :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this short love poem about the eternal love between you and your wife. good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with life/wife. Good alliteration with were/written. Clear message that is short and simple.

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014

Righteous Riter, thank you.