Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a well done 5-7-5 "I Love..." entry with a nice touch of humor. I agree about the children's being no trouble when they are asleep. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Hi Jeanie :) Thank you for your great comments and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from MERRY1

Excellent

What little angels they look. Worn out with all the devilment during the day I suppose.Great haiku and the count is correct and it flows well

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Thank you Merry1 for your great comments :) Kindest regards...

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

That is when children are at their sweetest :) In that moment you forget about all the other things they put you through :) This is well written. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Thank you CR for your great comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)